Sunday, December 16, 2007

The two arms grab
or holds in embrace
the capacious time
awaits in earnest ….

Arms that supplied
the sutler -
loading his mule, with
provisions for future;

Or the suitor
whose roses poor, with
damsel yearning, for
ere life … wastrel dear;

Or the wren
slender, tender, rounded
whose songs so rich .. alas!
unrelated .. so many .. so poor;

12 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I left a comment earlier, but I have been having some problems with such things. The poem is wonderful!

Manimala said...

Yes, unrelated...how did the wren come in? Perhaps love is a confusing whirlwind of emotions?

Alok said...

Andrew: It happens ... blogger is throwing up all sorts of problem these days ...

Manimala: Well as the sutler or suitor came in .. I guess that's the poetic licence we talk of ...

love to me buddy is honestly not confusing ... love is perhaps not seen by many or perhaps only by few

Thank u guys

Alok

Annie Wicking said...

Happy Christmas, Alok to you and your family.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your wonderful poems in the New Year.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with us my dear online friend.

Best wishes and a gentle hug to you,
Annie

annie said...

Am tired of sayin nice...tell me some other ways of praising ur writings.

Jeevan said...

Its was wonderful writing buddy, liked the last part.

der Bergwind said...

nice one...
cud have titled it

the two arms grab but still
they slip,
the moments in time, the moments of truth-
unrelated left the tricks o' time
the withered rose, the fears sublime-

Alok said...

Annie: Happy Christmas to you and ur family too ... have a blast this Christmas and new year Annie ... thanks for dropping by

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Annie: long time ... thanks for ur kind words

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Jeevan: thank u so much my friend ... thanks again

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Saptasi [der Bergwind] that was a lovely verse ... mate I have stopped giving title ... so wouldnt try again ... but i loved ur verse .. thank u

Thank you guys for taking your time out ... Really appreciated

Alok

Janice Thomson said...

My comment is not here either and I have forgotten what I wrote so I'll just say : beautiful and thought-provoking as always.

aria said...

I'd left a comment too :O
(Good one, as usual)

Alok said...

Janice: Blogger is becoming funny everyday ... as I read somewhere google will be very happy when we move to wordpress ... thanks for leaving ur footmark again to this post
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Aria: See it's not only you ... you had been facing problem with blogger and here I am ... thank again for leaving ur comment



Alok

kalai said...

nice post & i always had some feel with ur words & iam enjoying dat too....