the moon shied behind the boughs varnishing this drowsy night; the return of the skies - amidst unshent stars I looked for mine, through eyes of eon sea … as you kept searching for eternal rest, on this shore’s wedged bed sheet …..
'as you kept searching for eternal rest, on this shore’s wedged bed sheet...' - what awesome phrasing Alok! As usual your words delight all the senses.
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gorgeous!
'as you
kept searching
for eternal rest,
on this shore’s
wedged bed sheet...' - what awesome phrasing Alok! As usual your words delight all the senses.
excellent... dis remains me abot my early morning waking... my mind tells me to take rest but my heart alerts me of my duty... superb...
as Janice said, it delights all the senses. nice work!
Beautifully flowing.
Vesper: My thanks...
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Janice: Ah! thank u so much ...
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Kalai; most kind .. thanks
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Andrew: many thanks
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Jeevan: thank u
Alok
Beautiful!
You are really gifted.
Take care.
Venus: most kind ... thanks as always
Alok
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