Sunday, July 15, 2007

The question is ....

Would I have lived it differently
had the pen blotted un-relinquished,
A little more thought in the
spindrift slugging mind …..
and a sailor’s parafelia.

Attached with a rigging ship mast; in
the perihelion of unsophisticated sea
Exercised in snake-black night
of little but obscured sullen cilata …..
and leftover chasm of un-fulfillment.

Would I have lived it differently
had the pen blotted un-relinquished
In the smoke of known past
still black, untidy and ugly ….
but with psalms of cerebral proclivity.

11 comments:

KAYLEE said...

great question and post

Alok said...

hey Kaylee .... thanx ... & whts ur ans

well for my part the ans is no and somewhere is hidden in my prv post "Smal things make life beautiful" They are wht my life is & wldn't trade it for anything ... catch u soon. tc

KAYLEE said...

PRobably no!!!

Priya said...

Would I have lived it differently
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How different you can live from the present to future?

As a person from physical to mental ability, the only think growsup is our mind which wanders with no solution and all others remain the same as an object.

Life said...

its on us man!

good stuff

Take Care
Vikas{V}

Alok said...

hey Kaylee .... c i knew u wld say know .... how have been doing btw

Alok said...

Hey priya, ty

intelligent perspective ..... i couldn't agree with u more but i must say that when i was writing this the thought didnt come to my mind ... thanx for sharing the thought ....

Alok said...

Hey Vikas{V} thanx buddy ... really appreciated ... i liked ur signature style though

Anonymous said...

VERY WELL!!!!!!!!!

Rai said...

Liked it very much :-))))

BTW, thanks for visiting my blog!

Alok said...

hey thanx rai .... feel really good coming frm u ... ty