It’s your fragility that compels me
to be continuously afraid of you;
Breathing your space between my netherworld
could I be brought back to life like that,
your slightest touch is my memory
beneath the tumulus lies buried;
Perceptions vary the understanding between us,
of all the wishes that I were to ever encounter
the vein that bloods the earth and reaps its harvest
would never scorch the field barren;
I am afraid to even touch you; your fragility
compels me to be afraid of you; if you can
just enclose me for the moment and
many moments more borne out of you.
14 comments:
It brings tremendous emotions. Everything is fragile, illusions of a physical world, but a reality of the mind. Shall we dream forever...
This is lovely Alok, touching, wistful and more. Ditto Ghost Particle's words as well.
"your slightest touch is my memory"
very well written & had a nice feel... u r making us to realize the actual feel u had. dis is not possible for all. brilliant....keep going Alok...
A wished feeling, but afraid to enjoy. expressed it well buddy.
Truly a touching poem. Stole my emotions.Thank you for sharing. Take care.
like touching a snowflake...
fragility has its own strength
thank you
well-phrased expressions:)
i liked this phrase best ...
"just enclose me for the moment and
many moments more borne out of you."
clever one :)
Deep emotions and fragile.. a lot to think. Nice one Alok.
Siva [Ghost Particle]: Thank you for that ... it was such an enjoyable feel to read what you wrote. It gave me a satisfaction that you read what I intended to write ... thank u
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Janice: Thank you for that ... Though poetry is open to interpretation, nothing gives more satisfaction if you know someone understands the essence of what you want to say. I look forward to your comment for reinforcing my understanding
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Kalai: Thank you what a nice thing to say ... I am grateful
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Jeevan: Thank u buddy ... beautifully said....
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Venus: thank you so much ... appreciated
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Andrew: you could feel that ... thank u for ur words
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Floots: Thank you for that ... So very true
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Rai: thanks for the compliment ... its long time ... thanks for dropping by
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Priya: thank u ... If it made u think .. thats all this post intended to do ... thank u again
Alok
This is very personal. It shows us more of yourself and brings us closer to you. Very well done Alok. I love this one.
Tara [Inside our hands, outside our hearts]: thank you so much
Alok
passion indeed, fragilely and endearingly so.
Mystic Rose: Thank u as always for ur kind words
Alok
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