Saturday, November 10, 2007

Into the moulds of sea moss
I lurched in the unwarranted
dusty laden storm, across
the thrust of rocky ledges
lay essence of dead grasses.


I followed its footsteps
from muskeg to muskeg,
perished in the storage
of peat and smoke, I walked
slowly, with weltered questions ….


Once a tree, the girth of the log
I could embrace with shame, today
its befallen pride lay dead
in a cabal of destiny or shall I say
observe … His matter of fact play ….

11 comments:

Alok said...

It is becoming increasingly difficult with my new schedule to write or visit your pages on a daily basis.

I would continue to write when ever time permits but my visits to all you guys page will be far and between.

I hope you all will understand.


Alok

gP said...

Always good and always a genius. How do you put these words together...and since im a SF freak...i always think your poems are sf epic poe.

Write what you may when your heart wants it, then only the most beautiful will be born.

Janice Thomson said...

The internet is not everything so it's very understandable when life has other priorities. Keep writing as time permits and take care Alok.

laughingwolf said...

no problem, buddy... i'm off and on as real life permits, too

do take good care....

kalai said...

dont worry friend...

we all can understand ur situation... so.. b free...

okay.. u write wenever time permits 4 u...

take care of ur health....

KAYLEE said...

I understand:) How you been?

Jeevan said...

The words used in deep it shows, very nice verse buddy:)

Have your own time to write and read! take care.

aria said...

Wonderful .. last para is amazing!
If you keep churning these kinds . .at least I don't mind . .even if you don't visit me! I hardly post .. and I love reading you .. keep writing ..

Alok said...

Thanks ever body ... thank you


Alok

Manimala said...

I had to think about that one. Great.

Alok said...

Mani: Thank you for the effort.

Alok