Saturday, May 3, 2008

Wheel that has evolved
on a certain round notion
goes on and on
without revolution;

I stand at the edge
none the fear of falling
neither the unknown awe’s
revulsion to moving;

Some will land … conquered
where no land exists
beyond shore … sans energy
and quaint infinity breathing;

(and even if the land holds acquaintance
and speaks in funny old language
let him find another plain
and another air in semblance;

let him restrain
the spokes of running wheels
let him rejoice in his victory
of landing on another territory.)

10 comments:

gP said...

humanity is all about going forward, through inventions, revolutions and aspirations. and we will find the fruits of labor pleasing us, echoing through time.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

"goes on and on
without revolution"
not sure why, but I love that line.

Jyoti said...

bowled!

hats off to your writting capabilites!!

Alok said...

Siva: So rightly said .. it's a process .. a process of continuous search .. a process of continuous finding .. a process of continuous evolution ...

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Andrew: thanks a lot ...

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Jyoti: Its u guys who make me post here regularly :)


Thanks all of u for taking ur time out ...


Alok

Janice Thomson said...

Evolution, or change, is the status of all things be they human or material - a wheel is symbolic of this in many ways. Good one Alok.

Jeevan said...

Wheel sets example for being up and down in life at revolution.

Casperbaba said...

and even if the land holds acquaintance
and speaks in funny old language
let him find another plain
and another air in semblance;

let him restrain
the spokes of running wheels
let him rejoice in his victory
of landing on another territory.


AND THE LIFE EVER SO BEAUTIFUL WOULD LIVE ON.... amazing...
I really admire your hold over your vocabulary... you really inspire me.. keep up the awesome work bro...

Alok said...

Janice: So rightly said ... thanks so much for ur words ... I always look forward to them ...

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Jeevan: You hit the nail on the head with ur comment Jeevan .. brilliantly observed ... cheers

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Casper: Humbled ... wht else can I say .. thnks much ....


My thanks to all of you once more


Alok

Priya said...

This is beautiful Alok.

venuss66 said...

"Wheel that has evolved
on a certain round notion
goes on and on
without revolution"

Beautiful lines.