many rounds of black coffee
with futile aversions to white milk -
a round table meeting of two people,
in a round room, beside the chamber
with attractive wooden doors,
winding up the entire summer.
almost like a peignoir, loose and unsound
unarranged for all the seasons: whose questions
this summer; in the vague raining of confetti
gathered together … every year … year by year
in the constant fight of the last battle –
now discussing, deciding on the one survivor.
and the sleuth of afternoon summer sun
assumes the artificial cold of winter; proofs
all in a black binder, neatly folded and arranged
proofs, of all living … lost and dead , buried and found
chronicles of little smoke and all dust; unaccounted
discussed and decided on a round table in a round room.
17 comments:
For my tastes, this is excellent!
Wonderful imagery throughout but the last verse is my favourite and if you don't mind my saying so, could stand alone in its own right.
Is this budget discussions??
Your day today dealings said in best Alok.
wonderful description of a day at work. :)
Lots of neat imagery here, Alok! Well done...
A neat rounding off, if you'll pardon the pun, with that word used at the start and at the end of your poem.
Gives a convincing note of futility to your subject matter.
(BTW, Is there milk that is not white?)
I love the imagery in this - the peignoir metaphor is brilliant. The last verse is stunning Alok - it neatly encapsulates the triviality, in the end, of any board meeting. Excellent my friend.
the memories of that round table meeting must be kept away as those "ashes".
Beautiful words expressing a touching memory.
nice and lovely poem:)
You create an imaginary of a conference. The last verse is very good buddy :)
I liked the last verse immensely too .. sometimes I wonder why you abstain from bestowing titles to your work ..
brother i would second what aria says... why dun u give titles to your work.. trust me right now the kinda work u do can b classified as "anticipatory mass distruction" kinda matter.. once u put the titles it might convert into "pure fusion raction of matter nd anti matter"!! 100% energy emitted nothin left to change..... i love you work.. i need not say nething more.
Oh my Alok, I do love this one. The give in take can be compared in so many things. And I must admit I love thos seasons reaching inside each others pockets. Wonderful as usual.
Soft love,
T
an office?! or destinies library where all we live are stored.
you are too good bro :) I love it.
Miladysa: Thank you so much ... I am glad that you liked it and think that it can stand on its own ... thanx again
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Jeeves: Poetry is open to interpretation. I wouldn't like to restrict your imagination ... But if you ask me i wasn't thinking of that why writing this ... thanks again
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Priya: Thanks much for ur kind words as always
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Andrew: Cheers Andrew :)
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Lynda: Thanks for taking your time out and commenting ... appreciated
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Ish: Nice to see hear after such a long time ... No milk is other than white .... I would like to draw ur attention to Wallance Steven's "The poems of our climate" where he uses clear water for his japanese flower arrangement, now is there any water other than clear water that one uses for flower arrangement :) thanks a lot for dropping by
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Janice: Thanks. I am glad peignoir caught ur attention ... I had loved tht metaphor myself too :)
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Jyoti: My thanks as always madame for ur kind words :)
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Punk Master: Welcome and Thank you
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Jeevan: Thanks bro as always
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Aria: Many thanks. I think now I am incapable of assigning a title to the posts ... I am too lazy you see :) but on a serious note, I find it extremely difficult to find a title for the nonsense that I write ... so just leave them without title these days :)
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Casper: thanx bro as always. As for the title read my reply to Aria
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Tara: What a lovely thing to say ... I am glad you find this negotiation could be beyond a business meeting :) thanx as always
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Siva: You read me too well these days :)... thanx for taking time out
Alok
the thing is, one needs to read a lot and live through a lot to understand poetry......maybe this is the morning to fall in love with (your) words all over again......as i read these well read posts again, and understanding the difference between what has been read and what has been lived, i myself might find a way to bring back life to my verse, again...its that kind of morning today
parallel mirrors
repeating
seasons... events
and moments...
i love to look at
that attractive wooden door
leading to a place
my soul may soar...
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so stunning and... expressive...
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