many a times -
infact most of the times,
i follow the path of breaks and joints
while i hold few verses …
that fails to articulate
whatever i understand;
sentences that exited --
with or without
my penning them down,
on a piece of white paper
forgotten long time around …
while i break them into three lines
each of the same theme
but of different forms;
he asks me for a simple meaning
and i look at the earth -
and the sun -
and later on
towards
the mercurial moon,
on the long distant -
plain, placid sky
which all along looked at me
for assurance,
that i hoped to seek
in return;
but as monetary as desires are -
i seek gains,
even in broken sentences
and uninterrupted sequences
which i try and make
and fail to break again;
the broken verses
that followed a sequence
of this unknown poet,
in the broken alleys
of small towns
where he looked down
on the lighted thoroughfare,
on several occasions …
days and nights,
of jejune thoughts
or call it juvenile
if you may ….
if you wish ....
to call it that way - -
puerile breathing,
and complex impedance
of an adolescent mind.
13 comments:
aha! one more master piece from the genius "Alok"
Thanks for your prediction, but m not "the dulhan"...thats for my new sis-in-law.
Wonderfully articulated...
Aren't we all just adolescents in the play of life...
How many times I have tried to pen a thought and it just doesn't come out the right way or mean what I want it to mean.
Well said Alok.
So true Alok. When we try pen down, sometimes what comes to mind and we type reach different strings.
What I was going to say has already been said by Priva. :)
Jyoti: aha ... thanks a ton from an "ordinary" Alok :))
and congratulations to ur bhabhi once more :))
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Jeeves: My thanks as always
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Janice: this piece does talk of many other things including the difficulty of expressing exactly wht u want to say, tht was more of a cover :))) don't knw whether tht worked :) indeed we are adolescents in this play of life :) thanks a ton as always Janice
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Priya: As I say words though are a good medium of expressions, they are on many (most) occasions insufficient :) my thanks to u as always
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Andrew: Cheers Andrew :))
Thank u everyone for taking ur time out .... Have a wonderful weekend :)
**of this unknown poet,
in the broken alleys
of small towns
lovely!
Keshi.
"sentences that exited --
with or without
my penning them down"
I know that feeling well :-D
I like this very much - looking through your eyes and peaking into the toolbox of a craftsman :-D
but as monetary as desires are -
i seek gains,
even in broken sentences
and uninterrupted sequences
which i try and make
and fail to break again;
bravo... sheer brilliance... i loved the way you picture the helplessness so neatly that it slips by as a deliberate faliure! amazing my friend! simply rocking.
In whatever way our thoughts must to exist. simple nice.
I have run out of adjectives. You are too good.
this might be my most favourite poem of all... i love, i revel in these borken, disjointed poetry :)
Keshi: Thank you much mate ...
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Miladysa: Thank you so much .. so u do endorse me as a crafts man :)))
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Casper: I couldnt have described it as eloquently as u did ... thanks a lot
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Jeevan: thanks .. I am glad u liked it
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Aria: None needed at all .. ur visits are wht is imp :) .. thanks as always
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Adi: I am glad u liked it ... thanks a lot
Alok
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