Saturday, May 10, 2008

many a times -
infact most of the times,
i follow the path of breaks and joints
while i hold few verses …
that fails to articulate
whatever i understand;

sentences that exited --
with or without
my penning them down,
on a piece of white paper
forgotten long time around …
while i break them into three lines
each of the same theme
but of different forms;

he asks me for a simple meaning
and i look at the earth -
and the sun -
and later on
towards
the mercurial moon,
on the long distant -
plain, placid sky
which all along looked at me
for assurance,
that i hoped to seek
in return;

but as monetary as desires are -
i seek gains,
even in broken sentences
and uninterrupted sequences
which i try and make
and fail to break again;

the broken verses
that followed a sequence
of this unknown poet,
in the broken alleys
of small towns
where he looked down
on the lighted thoroughfare,
on several occasions …
days and nights,
of jejune thoughts
or call it juvenile
if you may ….
if you wish ....
to call it that way - -
puerile breathing,
and complex impedance
of an adolescent mind.

13 comments:

Jyoti said...

aha! one more master piece from the genius "Alok"

Thanks for your prediction, but m not "the dulhan"...thats for my new sis-in-law.

Jeeves said...

Wonderfully articulated...

Janice Thomson said...

Aren't we all just adolescents in the play of life...
How many times I have tried to pen a thought and it just doesn't come out the right way or mean what I want it to mean.
Well said Alok.

Priya said...

So true Alok. When we try pen down, sometimes what comes to mind and we type reach different strings.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

What I was going to say has already been said by Priva. :)

Alok said...

Jyoti: aha ... thanks a ton from an "ordinary" Alok :))

and congratulations to ur bhabhi once more :))

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Jeeves: My thanks as always

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Janice: this piece does talk of many other things including the difficulty of expressing exactly wht u want to say, tht was more of a cover :))) don't knw whether tht worked :) indeed we are adolescents in this play of life :) thanks a ton as always Janice

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Priya: As I say words though are a good medium of expressions, they are on many (most) occasions insufficient :) my thanks to u as always

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Andrew: Cheers Andrew :))



Thank u everyone for taking ur time out .... Have a wonderful weekend :)

Keshi said...

**of this unknown poet,
in the broken alleys
of small towns

lovely!

Keshi.

Miladysa said...

"sentences that exited --
with or without
my penning them down"

I know that feeling well :-D

I like this very much - looking through your eyes and peaking into the toolbox of a craftsman :-D

Casperbaba said...

but as monetary as desires are -
i seek gains,
even in broken sentences
and uninterrupted sequences
which i try and make
and fail to break again;

bravo... sheer brilliance... i loved the way you picture the helplessness so neatly that it slips by as a deliberate faliure! amazing my friend! simply rocking.

Jeevan said...

In whatever way our thoughts must to exist. simple nice.

aria said...

I have run out of adjectives. You are too good.

delhidreams said...

this might be my most favourite poem of all... i love, i revel in these borken, disjointed poetry :)

Alok said...

Keshi: Thank you much mate ...

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Miladysa: Thank you so much .. so u do endorse me as a crafts man :)))

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Casper: I couldnt have described it as eloquently as u did ... thanks a lot

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Jeevan: thanks .. I am glad u liked it

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Aria: None needed at all .. ur visits are wht is imp :) .. thanks as always

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Adi: I am glad u liked it ... thanks a lot


Alok