Sunday, April 13, 2008

“in questioning lies man’s downfall”
- whose rhythm I cannot apostatize
incalculable time spent on naught
whose productivity I cannot belie;

life that breathes after my death
Father will you not question
my meager existence without
betroth to own, in unearned request;

let me seek my own questions
through wastelands apprehend
- stunned by unvanquishable truths
- assume phoenix’s own willful request;

10 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

so much said! great work! :)

Jyoti said...

Beauuuuuuuuuuutiful!

Janice Thomson said...

Well said Alok - your work always requires a couple readings to get the gist of the many layers. Wonderful work again.

gP said...

I agree with Janice...its not simply to take whats there...i can relate and also dechiper more and more.
//let me seek my own questions
through wastelands apprehend//
we all should. great one bro.

Annie Wicking said...

Wonderful my gentle friend.

Such words can only come from a soul of a poet.

Best wishes

Annie

Priya said...

Touching notes Alok....

Keshi said...

only u can write like this Alok!

I feel super dumb when I read ur great posts :)

Keshi.

Alok said...

Andrew: Many Thanks for the constant encouragement.

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Jyoti: Thank u ... wht happened to ur blog btw

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Janice: That's an excellent thing to say .. Many thanks

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Siva: I draw immense satisfaction from ur comment .. Makes all the effort worthwhile

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Annie: You are kind .. thank u

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Priya: Thanks a lot

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Keshi: then it is not a gr8 post :) .. thanks mate


Thank u guys. Truly appreciated


Alok

Indrajit said...

agree with Janice.
:) rocking and bombastic :)

Jeevan said...

I am learning to write poems and also new words from you alok. Very nice!