“in questioning lies man’s downfall”
- whose rhythm I cannot apostatize
incalculable time spent on naught
whose productivity I cannot belie;
life that breathes after my death
Father will you not question
my meager existence without
betroth to own, in unearned request;
let me seek my own questions
through wastelands apprehend
- stunned by unvanquishable truths
- assume phoenix’s own willful request;
10 comments:
so much said! great work! :)
Beauuuuuuuuuuutiful!
Well said Alok - your work always requires a couple readings to get the gist of the many layers. Wonderful work again.
I agree with Janice...its not simply to take whats there...i can relate and also dechiper more and more.
//let me seek my own questions
through wastelands apprehend//
we all should. great one bro.
Wonderful my gentle friend.
Such words can only come from a soul of a poet.
Best wishes
Annie
Touching notes Alok....
only u can write like this Alok!
I feel super dumb when I read ur great posts :)
Keshi.
Andrew: Many Thanks for the constant encouragement.
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Jyoti: Thank u ... wht happened to ur blog btw
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Janice: That's an excellent thing to say .. Many thanks
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Siva: I draw immense satisfaction from ur comment .. Makes all the effort worthwhile
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Annie: You are kind .. thank u
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Priya: Thanks a lot
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Keshi: then it is not a gr8 post :) .. thanks mate
Thank u guys. Truly appreciated
Alok
agree with Janice.
:) rocking and bombastic :)
I am learning to write poems and also new words from you alok. Very nice!
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