Favouring tongue bears favouring speech;
So did she tell me in Cantonese
and as difficult an art as crochet
easily differentiates a novice;
I smiled instead,
for words were none
almost like the empty coke can
holding to quench my thirst
on a blank summer afternoon –
Well so does it happen
my empty smile betrayed me
giving away secrets of soul
as always like a traitor;
How long have you been here –
in pure honey coated brisk mannered
English she speaks - - -
I still smile back at her
entranced .. well almost
smiling foolishly …
14 comments:
A thirst for language and if spoken, it fills the hearts of others.
Brilliant! Left me feeling as though I was witness to the events [and I was through your words] and wanting to know more...
a perfect ending :-D
I feel the same as Miladysa! :)
An excellent capture of the moment.
I smiled right along with you. Wonderful Alok!
"words were none almost like the empty coke can held to quench my thirst"
nice comparision!!
delightfully crafted .. :)
Brilliant slice of life.
Poetic novel in the making.
love?
Heh...you know I always ask this :p
Perfectly summarizing your linguistic adventure :)
smiles can can lose or gain us so much
i enjoyed this meeting
thank you
Wow! I am so curious now.
:))
How playful Alok. I love this. You seem to always have something underneath that we sometimes have to pull out. Like a hidden treat on easter.
Soft love,
T
Priya: Well said ... thank u
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Miladysa: That's such a nice thing to say ... Thank u
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Andrew: Thanks a lot
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Janice: Purpose solved ... I hope I can carry with me smile, pain, happiness and exuberance all in equal measurement ... thnx a lot
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Jyoti: Many thanks
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Aria: Thanks a lot
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Julie: tht was one part that I was getting at .. thank u
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Siva: Nah! Thanks bro
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Floots ... so true ... so when will u be back :)
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Mary: Nothing much really
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Tara: That comment makes writing worthwhile
Thank you all for giving me your time
Alok
Cool buddy ;) the smiles filled the can isn’t it :)
i like your poems. they are short & intense
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