Saturday, March 22, 2008











speaking of those almost prince like;
charm that breathes fresh air
and spreads the bloom,
aye! such talented colours
on spring’s bosom
has blossomed again;


wrought thou my art, almost ruined
few moments ago on a lonely chair,
in a yard where droplets silently
kissed the grass under her small bare feet
and her eyes that held a glance
over the ray floret blushing pink
and a sense of joy under a gray roof
- a little persuasion for winds to woo.




11 comments:

Anonymous said...

your poetry adds up a more magic to my soul ...What more can say

Yours in writing

Nasra

Miladysa said...

Spiffing poem Alok!

Reminds me of those old English poets :-D

Each line is bliss :-D

Alok said...

Nasra: Thank u so much for such soothing words ...

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Miladysa: Ahh! I think Blake somewhere haunted me coz I was practically reading him most of the morning yesterday .... thank u mostly :)


Thank u guys

Alok

Janice Thomson said...

This was utterly charming Alok!
The photos are gorgeous -what is the yellow blossom?

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I agree with the others. I wish I could describe breaty as well as you - also, the photos are wonderful! wish I was there. :)

gP said...

//kissed the grass under her small bare feet
and her eyes that held a glance//

what imagination may her eyes have, too see the world stand beautifully same,
what world she will grow up to,
in the turbulence of humanity.

Jeevan said...

Wow I could feel the fragrance of nature in breeze, and sense the spring here when wind entering through window.

Alok said...

Janice: Thank u so much ... As regards to the flower .. I am still finding out .. I dont know the name ... but it looked strikingly beautiful when I took it '


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Andrew: Be my guest please :) do letme know if u ever come to Singapore .. u have my mail id ... and thank u for ur kindness ... u made my day

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Siva: Ohh! I loved ur interpretation to the piece ... ur comment gave it something that it lacked ... thanx as always bro

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Jeevan: Ah! such a lovely comment .. thank u much


Thanks guys .. as always truly appreciated


Alok

Priya said...

few moments ago on a lonely chair,
in a yard where droplets silently
kissed the grass under her small bare feet
and her eyes that held a glance

-Enjoyed these lines Alok.

aria said...

Each phrase in this verse is tactile and warm and yes it has that enchanting 'classic' feel to it..

Alok said...

Priya: My thanks as always

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Aria: U r so kind ... thanks as always


Alok