images of hibernal clouds
cling on the terrace walls
a wholesome day of scarce fancy
within lost imaginative prowls;
and the evening’s scarlet sky
assumes infinite scars
with twisted images of an afternoon
curled in an armchair by his side;
amidst mickle of old poems
and few pages of polemic verses
his mind wanders in a coppice -
- star’s search for twinkling lights;
18 comments:
i like that the stars are searching for light...
I found this one very relaxing - you painted the scene beautifully.
'the evening’s scarlet sky
assumes infinite scars' - ooh I like this phrase - such remarkable imagery. Love that last verse - old books often do that to one.
hey Alok how can stars be searching for twinkiling lights when they themselves r twinkiling lights? :)
Keshi.
very soothing....
It put to imaginative your expression and sighting scarlet sky is very rare here. glad you enjoy the beautiful evening :)
be still my beating mind :)
restless and beautiful thoughts
thank you
Vesper: thank u much :) ... the line struck me coincidentally (which to mean is tht it was not a conscious effort) while I was just thinking how to bring along the stars in the piece :)
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Miladysa: the weekend effect after all those weekdays :) thanks so much
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Janice: you know I so desperately wanted to use the word assume in this piece .. infact the whole sunday I was thinking I will use "assume" differently in a series of poems ... Now Sunday is gone :( I still will try .. though tht zest has fizzled out .... thank u much
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Keshi: oh! they have dimmed under the clouds :) wht can they do poor fellows ... as it is they find it difficult to c in such dim twinkling light and then with tht the cloud doing a blind fold .. oh tht gives me ideas :) thanx mate
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Andrew: the SPA impact :) ... thank u so much (it seems I m in too good a mood :))
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TVdeLCD: Welcome and thanks
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Jeevan: thanx mate ... honestly didnt have a scarlet sky that evening with all the rains that we are having lately ... surprisingly today was a sunny day :)
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Floots: U caught tht same flu didn't u .. the restless infectious virus is doing the rounds these days:) thanks so much
Thanks all for such kind words .... appreciated
Alok
"and the evening’s scarlet sky
assumes infinite scars"
thats an artful imagery.. deeply felt and keenly observed ..
**they have dimmed under the clouds
aha :) but having clouds over the twinkling stars dun reduce their true shimmer does it?
Keshi.
I think we all are stars searching for the light at the end of the tunnel.
aye wordsmithey !! it wont be an exaggerration to say tht wordswroth is reborn...:) :)
write more..
Alok,
You are improving each time I visit and I love reading your writing. This was quite nice and the last line was marvelous.
soft love,
T
Happy Festival days buddy, have fun and take care :)
the way it has been put together is simply amazing!
an aged star looking down at us, an aged man looking beyond his time, and aging earth reminiscing its life. times words bro.
Aria: Thanks a lot for understanding the underlying sentiment ..
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Keshi: They havent lost it completely .. hence the search :) thanx matey
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Priya: So true thanx mate
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Indrajit: I am a little embarrassed by such profuse compliment .... I am not deserving of such stature .. but thanx a lot
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Tara: Ah! thank u so much ... as the tag line of this page reads "Lapsus Calamai ... A journey an exercise" :) thanx a lot
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Jeevan: To u too my friend ... Have a blast this weekend
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Anupama: Thank u so much ... felt over the top
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Siva: Thanks for such eloquence ... I will treasure this for sometime
Thank you all for those lovely comments ... truly heartfelt
Alok
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