Janice: You know I did try a few before but they were so bad that I just had to tear off those papers :) but I had to express the way my weekends simply fly away becoz of all these chores :) yes I need so much practice .. thanks Janice
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Andrew: You really think so ... I am over the moon :)
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My first attempt at Haiku ... Any suggestion for improvement .. though I know I didnt follow the 5-7-5 ons but still ...
Alok
Good start Alok - haiku is a difficult art and takes much "practice" :)
this is a good start! :)
don't know anything about Haiku, so nothing to tell about it, but the line was very nice alok.
Janice: You know I did try a few before but they were so bad that I just had to tear off those papers :) but I had to express the way my weekends simply fly away becoz of all these chores :) yes I need so much practice .. thanks Janice
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Andrew: You really think so ... I am over the moon :)
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Jeevan: thanx as always for ur encouragement
Alok
How did I miss reading this..
Haiku hmm.. I prsonally am not a great fan of Haiku but I liked this one ..
Aria: thank u so much for ur kindness ...
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