peace rules my house
sans noises -
sans cries -
sans people -
sans voice ….
infact mirrors do speak
and I am awaken by a presence
of something … arr somebody
looking through a glass ...
and …
friends can be beyond
a structured being
a structured human being;
strike a conversation
strike one indeed,
and you will hear
playful, interwoven noises
arr sounds I mean ...
but …
then, I realise almost solemnly
peace indeed rules my house
for mirrors don’t speak
or do they … or do I
simply conceive .....
15 comments:
Like the introduction of the word 'structured' - and the mirror theme reflecting back within the poem.
Thanks for your comment on mine - I forgot to add that the poem related back to the main post on Virtual Voyage (visit to Colchester Castle), to put it in context!
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Nasra
Mirrors do speak with your reflection in action while expressing yourself.
Sometimes mystery rules in peace ;) I wish you get pleasant from the peace.
made me feel peaceful for a moment...tnxx Alok!
btw come play the game in my blog ;-)
Keshi.
the human mind in play, as it searches for solitude. but you are right, there are windows and doors everywhere to be heard and seen. why judge when we can just peek.
This is interesting piece.
I love the way it plays with your minds eye.
Best wishes
Annie
a deeply reflective piece :)
thanks alok
Contemplation can lead us in many directions as you have proven in this piece - no one answer is the right answer - it is relative to the one contemplating.
now you have me thinking about ME --- thanks - wonderful work!
Julie: Thank you for ur words .. I will check the main post ..
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Nasra: thanks for letting me know ..
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Priya: Extremely well said ... thanks
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Jeevan: Mystery and peace ... hmm dont think can find both of them :) thanx mate
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Keshi: I am glad .. thanx mate
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Siva: Not sure whether solitude is always the best option available ... There are times when u really wish to hear someone else other than urself .. thanx bro
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Annie: I am glad u enjoyed it ... thanx
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Floots: Thanks floots :)
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Janice: I think thats my bane ... I look at everything in its relativity ... thanx mam
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Andrew: Thanks a lot Andrew ...
Thanks guys for dropping by .. truly appreciated
Alok
I saw all kinds of hidden meanings in this wonderfully atmospheric and slightly chilling poem :-D
Miladysa: You are bang on … there are lot of hidden meanings attached to this piece … I have tried to experiment a little with this poem …. I hope it worked … thanks
Alok
I have come back here many times and read this piece again & again. I still don't know how to express - how much I loved this :)
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