wrinkled causeries of eider-down duvet
blissful next morning -
testimonials of you and me.
I have hardly ever described you
but you remind me of rain,
whose purling beads of pure ecstasy
mildly paints
and easily
swoons by fragrance of spring
incepted of new breath
and wings my dream.
I never thought I needed to ……….
I never realised .... I could'nt ………
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Thirst never ends buddy;)
"I have hardly ever described you
but you remind me of rain"
beautiful... and the 'unsaid' says a lot :)
wow today I wrote a 'rainy' post too :)
Keshi.
this is perfect! it's raining here right now and puts me into your poem. :)
Fragrance and wind moves... spring goes; summer comes here, heat waves!
I loved this Alok - even if it's not raining here - well at the moment it's not but I'll think of this poem when it does.
we always need someone to complete us and make life beautiful. thats how I interpreted this magnificent piece. :)
Very touching and wonderful to read.
Only a man who knows love well could write such words in this way :-D
Pria: It indeed never does .. isnt it .. thanks a lot
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Aria: They say a soul .. every silence sounds different :) thank u
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Keshi: it was a cool post as usual .. thank u
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Andrew: that haiku was fantastic ... thank u
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Jeevan: beautifully said ... thank u
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Janice: bows .. I am humbled .. thnk u
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Siva: Howsoever we may say that we can live alone .. in our hearts of heart we know we need a companion .. thnk u
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Miladysa: I hope I do .. I honestly hope so thank u
Thank you all for dropping by ... Truly appreciated
Alok
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