Tuesday, April 15, 2008

A virgule nonpareil light slants through his mind ....
--- whose looks can not deceive trained eyes.

Looking / searching through pliant mind on whose surface rusts the rust. And whose wallet searches for impecunious illumination.

It almost rhymed.

It didn’t.

Surely didn’t

But stood out as if its penurious lyricism was almost a blessing.

Almost an assumed freedom.

5 comments:

aria said...

"whose wallet searches for impecunious illumination."

lovely way of saying something that we all search for :)
the analogy was unique too .. the freedom of free-verse and indigence..

Priya said...

Assumed freedom like dreams do play a great part in our lives.

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Alok,

You make me smile every time I come here. I love the swimming in and out of words you do.
"Almost an assumed freedom"

Just like life and love. Loved this.

Soft love,
T

Alok said...

Aria: Thanks a lot ... It was a pleasure reading ur take on this ... I loved "the freedom of free-verse and indigence.."

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Priya: Thanks .. they surely do :)

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Tara: Just like life ... thanks a lot .. cheers


Alok

Jeevan said...

In freedom of mind, money is not to satisfy it.