Shall we walk into the mist?
From where no one has ever returned
Where unexplored mysteries sleep
And a haze that explains nothing
Overshadows forlorn belongings;
This is the road that walks there
Where no shadows have ever followed
And no lover has stayed alone
Where with open arms they embrace
The abysses of unclaimed depth;
Where shadows that lived a life
No longer exist,
Where the trembling heart
No longer breathes,
Where journeys no longer pretend;
Let us hide once beyond recognition
Let's today walk into this mist.
15 comments:
Quite romanctic Alok. Loved it.
-Pria
ooo i love the mist! lovely!
The line that jumps out for me is the haze that explains nothing.
Brilliantly observed.
Hope to move back into poetry as I settle into WP - thank you for all your encouragement in this short time.
This is beautiful Alok!
Love the line "a haze that explains nothing" - what a wonderful way of expressing this. Yes...let's walk into that mist.
once again, your words stay with me.
Liked the last two para's
I am always ready to walk in mist for the desirable. Beautiful poem alok :)
Beautiful, simply beautiful..
Best wishes, Alok.
Annie
"Where journeys no longer pretend;"
that should be fascinating.
even the mist in your poetry is lucid.
Very atmospheric and I would love to walk into that mist... mayhaps I have... :-D
I walk in the mist most of the time..
keshi.
i couldn't refrain myself from following your lead into the "mist"... tempting.. indeed you made it.
Wonderful lines. How have you been?
Thank you everyone ... I am a little tied up right, hence not able to respond to ur comments personally .... I do appreciate all your thoughts. Thanks once again
Alok
lets walk into unchartered mirrors of this world, unlike surfaces, the mist unravels more.
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