Thursday, August 2, 2007

Fiend ....

I fear dreams sometime
dreams that make you dream again
of the broken shafts, rivers and inspired sun .......

I wait, I long, I nurture a dream of nightmare
the silent apparition and juxtaposed howls
of black sins and winful voodoo without a grin .......

I crave for empty bowls and glass full of liquor
for the piece of reality and obscured pleasure
hath begot in unstated unsecured minds .......

I plead for ignorance of the blissful mercy
in my enjoyable state of aphoristically blatant lies
with contradiction and demurred prescription ......

I refuse ablution of my unreligious sins
for I want to lie uncovered in the decayed crypt
and wait for my turn in merciful hell .......

25 comments:

Anonymous said...

i do too hehe and I am okay today:)

Anonymous said...

i didnt sleep last night:(

aria said...

So eloquent .. You seem to be on a roll or perhaps you always are..

Keshi said...

Alok I feel blonde reading this LOL! Cos its to heavy for my pooor brain...


Keshi.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

wow!

laughingwolf said...

powerful stuff there, alok... nicely wrought

gP said...

really powerful, the wordplay is mesmerizing yet vivid.

//dreams that make you dream again// --- i have this many times...many many times.

Janice Thomson said...

Alok the imagery in this is superb! A powerful and emotive piece.

KAYLEE said...

YO enjoy your weekend!!!!!!!!!!!! my friend.

Toriz said...

That's lovely!

Life said...

hmm true and really feelings..but we still dare to dream ..right??

Take Care
Vikas{V}

Amandeep Singh said...

Wow Mayn!!!!

I am not the only one hoo gets these kinda dreams...

awww.. u on crack tooo

lol

Annie Wicking said...

"...Wait for my turn in merciful hell..." How sad is that, too long for hell...

I hope not...

Best wishes

Annie

delhidreams said...

shud i say something? but why m feeling outta words? me, of all ppl :)
brilliant stuff man.
bleak yes. but here's wishing u sunshine in india, soon.

KAYLEE said...

how are u?

gulnaz said...

dreams do haunt....true!
:)

Alok said...

Kaylee ... so u have a dark side too ... gr8 ..... hope u r doing good ... take care!

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Keshi ... lol! i turned white after reading it ... need serious hair colouring to do myself ... ohh thats 350$ no......

on a serious not i myself dunno wht was going thru my head when i wrote this .... and ended up glorifying & sexing up all that it dark ..... outrageous i guess ..

btw this is just a sarcastic take on all that glitters from outside but is black like grease from inside ....

take care

Alok said...

Andrew sir, thanx a ton!

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laughing wolf was hoping u wld like it ..... thanx

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ghosty ... ty ... felt good reading tht comment

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Janice ... wow! thank you so much

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tori .... thanx ...glad to c u here

take care

Alok said...

vikas ... yes buddy we shld never leaving dreaming ... just that i think we shld be ready for their nightmare

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stand by .... thanx man! u r bang on mate

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annie nah! its not that bad .... sometimes we just wait too long for heaven ... a journey to hell wld be shorter .... atleast an end is in sight ... thanx for the concern ....

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adi ... thanx buddy ... bleak life yeah .... u bet .. ty

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gulnaz ... thanx for reading ... yes dreams haunt us like anything ty

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thank you all of u guys .... hope u r having a gr8 weekend

appreciated

take care

Anonymous said...

Alok: Why is it always sad? Bring out happiness too... and u will feel better even during hard times.

Alok said...

Priya ... :)

Manimala said...

I can feel the coldness of that soul. Nice.

annie said...

A dimwit like me took some time to comprehend the depth behind words..but then when i did...realised how beautifully it's written.Perused thru some of ur other posts..indeed,you belong to the clan of literati.

Alok said...

Mani, thanx ...

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Annie, oh! no, ur words have just overjoyed me ...

tc

alok

What's In A Name ? said...

lovely poem......with sketched details. One thing.....big words mar the rhyme sometimes. otherwise its nice.