Though many scenes of pillaging occurs, the farmer was very confident in his dream and he was working hard in the hot sun. Iam sure that his hardwork never fails.
I think, this relates to us too. Illegal things are happening in this world. At present, we cant control it. So, be confident in all your works. Our hardwork too never fails.
a whole lot of images and emotions reading this poem. and i can see it.. very well done!
as for the emotions.. yet through it all, through all the obstacles and challenges to the dream, man does make thigns happen. the farmer does feed the world.
i doff my hat to that farmer!!! salute his courage, his strength! i think that is an excellent metaphor too for those who fight against all the odds and the reward is not always in terms of money. its a a hard life indeed and the common avergae guy who lives it decently and works hard is the real hero. loved it alok!
Siva [Ghost Particle] Yes you can read it like that ... as u know there is nothing right or wrong with poetry, it can be interpreted in many different ways, thank you
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Keshi thats a beautiful thing to say, thank you
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Ronak Absolutely by choice, else will be difficult to earn my living :) thank you
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Andrew , my thanks to you sir
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Rose very true, thank you so much
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Neers thnx a ton
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Jeevan thanx buddy
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Tony [laughing wolf] thank you my frnd
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Gulnaz very well said, thanx for appreciating
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Nitin [nit-wit] As we discussed, wasnt reflecting on society :) ... thank you buddy
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Alok,
How beautiful you have pictured the working scene of a farmer in a hot sun. Lovely.
Beautifully expressed .. and thought provoking too ..
What an apt title for this wonderful and stimulating piece Alok.
hope and desolation in the same scene
well done
Dash of positivity with a hope of mojo to strike against all odds. Greato!!
I am better now
felt like a time travel from medieval england to the present day. or am i mistaken. :D
Both meaninglessness and meaning of life is portrayed in one poem..beautiful!
Keshi.
Alok,
That was brilliant...
Though many scenes of pillaging occurs, the farmer was very confident in his dream and he was working hard in the hot sun. Iam sure that his hardwork never fails.
I think, this relates to us too. Illegal things are happening in this world. At present, we cant control it. So, be confident in all your works. Our hardwork too never fails.
Just one question for you Alok
Banker by choice or by chance ???
You should look for alternative career options
Sorry not look have alternative career options
Ah, a good one. :)
a whole lot of images and emotions reading this poem.
and i can see it.. very well done!
as for the emotions..
yet through it all, through all the obstacles and challenges to the dream, man does make thigns happen.
the farmer does feed the world.
wow!! simply beautiful, alok!
There dreams are our life.
It’s short, but carries large. Very nice buddy :)
very nicely said, my friend
i doff my hat to that farmer!!!
salute his courage, his strength! i think that is an excellent metaphor too for those who fight against all the odds and the reward is not always in terms of money. its a a hard life indeed and the common avergae guy who lives it decently and works hard is the real hero. loved it alok!
Destruction or stewardship? the choice is ours. I like the sharply contrasting imagery.
The poet in you is giving socialistic connotations..
Gud one against feudal lords
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floots Many thanks
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Annie thanks for appreciating
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Kaylee I am so glad, thank you
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Siva [Ghost Particle] Yes you can read it like that ... as u know there is nothing right or wrong with poetry, it can be interpreted in many different ways, thank you
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Keshi thats a beautiful thing to say, thank you
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Kalai true, thank you for your words
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Ronak Absolutely by choice, else will be difficult to earn my living :) thank you
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Andrew , my thanks to you sir
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Rose very true, thank you so much
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Neers thnx a ton
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Jeevan thanx buddy
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Tony [laughing wolf] thank you my frnd
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Gulnaz very well said, thanx for appreciating
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Steve [Ish] , true, the choice is ours, my thanks
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Nitin [nit-wit] As we discussed, wasnt reflecting on society :) ... thank you buddy
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Thanks guys
Alok
lovely lovely thoughts & the words...You have crafted the scene simply exquisitely in words...very well done!
Thanx a lot Kaylan for your beautiful words
alok
Beautiful! I like this poem. Take care.
Nice juxtaposition of violence with normalcy.
@ venus and mani, thank you so much
alok
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