I fear dreams sometime
dreams that make you dream again
of the broken shafts, rivers and inspired sun .......
I wait, I long, I nurture a dream of nightmare
the silent apparition and juxtaposed howls
of black sins and winful voodoo without a grin .......
I crave for empty bowls and glass full of liquor
for the piece of reality and obscured pleasure
hath begot in unstated unsecured minds .......
I plead for ignorance of the blissful mercy
in my enjoyable state of aphoristically blatant lies
with contradiction and demurred prescription ......
I refuse ablution of my unreligious sins
for I want to lie uncovered in the decayed crypt
and wait for my turn in merciful hell .......
25 comments:
i do too hehe and I am okay today:)
i didnt sleep last night:(
So eloquent .. You seem to be on a roll or perhaps you always are..
Alok I feel blonde reading this LOL! Cos its to heavy for my pooor brain...
Keshi.
wow!
powerful stuff there, alok... nicely wrought
really powerful, the wordplay is mesmerizing yet vivid.
//dreams that make you dream again// --- i have this many times...many many times.
Alok the imagery in this is superb! A powerful and emotive piece.
YO enjoy your weekend!!!!!!!!!!!! my friend.
That's lovely!
hmm true and really feelings..but we still dare to dream ..right??
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Wow Mayn!!!!
I am not the only one hoo gets these kinda dreams...
awww.. u on crack tooo
lol
"...Wait for my turn in merciful hell..." How sad is that, too long for hell...
I hope not...
Best wishes
Annie
shud i say something? but why m feeling outta words? me, of all ppl :)
brilliant stuff man.
bleak yes. but here's wishing u sunshine in india, soon.
how are u?
dreams do haunt....true!
:)
Kaylee ... so u have a dark side too ... gr8 ..... hope u r doing good ... take care!
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Keshi ... lol! i turned white after reading it ... need serious hair colouring to do myself ... ohh thats 350$ no......
on a serious not i myself dunno wht was going thru my head when i wrote this .... and ended up glorifying & sexing up all that it dark ..... outrageous i guess ..
btw this is just a sarcastic take on all that glitters from outside but is black like grease from inside ....
take care
Andrew sir, thanx a ton!
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laughing wolf was hoping u wld like it ..... thanx
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ghosty ... ty ... felt good reading tht comment
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Janice ... wow! thank you so much
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tori .... thanx ...glad to c u here
take care
vikas ... yes buddy we shld never leaving dreaming ... just that i think we shld be ready for their nightmare
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stand by .... thanx man! u r bang on mate
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annie nah! its not that bad .... sometimes we just wait too long for heaven ... a journey to hell wld be shorter .... atleast an end is in sight ... thanx for the concern ....
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adi ... thanx buddy ... bleak life yeah .... u bet .. ty
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gulnaz ... thanx for reading ... yes dreams haunt us like anything ty
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thank you all of u guys .... hope u r having a gr8 weekend
appreciated
take care
Alok: Why is it always sad? Bring out happiness too... and u will feel better even during hard times.
Priya ... :)
I can feel the coldness of that soul. Nice.
A dimwit like me took some time to comprehend the depth behind words..but then when i did...realised how beautifully it's written.Perused thru some of ur other posts..indeed,you belong to the clan of literati.
Mani, thanx ...
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Annie, oh! no, ur words have just overjoyed me ...
tc
alok
lovely poem......with sketched details. One thing.....big words mar the rhyme sometimes. otherwise its nice.
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