on an otherwise inveigh night
see I could still see ….
anew … of only
me and you;
Your body painting
with the innate brush
of my folded fingers;
Firm smooth paints -
and turpentine grease -
filling sense of your fragrance
slow stroking shocking lush
and sudden lurch of sea side rush;
My body craving
for the sustaining love;
Or is it aspersed lust -
to make up for something
that bears close resemblance;
But then red will red
and white will be white
forever with or without
the sprinkled thrust;
Our thrust ….
Your … mine … ours ….
11 comments:
That was quite intimate and cool:)
Wow! A few may be running to take a cold shower after reading this Alok. Your words make spectacular imagery and love the reference to the ocean.
A wonderful read.
beautiful lines!
Well now Alok, this was most seductive. I think Janice and I got a heated rush after reading this. I loved this Alok. I think this may be one of your best.
Soft love.Tara
Great writing :) I enjoyed reading most of ur archives.. :)
I agree with Janice! :)
certainly put a spring in my step :)
thanks alok
Its fire and flames ..eruption of lava
I love your poetry
I hate signing that me Nasra at Windo Within Myslef ..thanks you for encouraging me to write ...
Pria: Thanks ... glad tht u thght it was cool .. I was a little hesitant posting it :)
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Janice: LOL ... so it had the desired effect :) as I said I was a little hesitant in posting this .. thanks as always
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White Forest: Welcome and thank u
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Tara [ Inside our hands, outside our hearts]: :) thank u ... soft love
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Ponnarasi [Ponnarasi Kothandaraman]: Welcome and thanks for ur time in going thru the archive ... thanks much
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Andrew [J. Andrew Lockhart]: :) thank u much
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Floots: that was the intention :) thank u as always
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Anon [Nasra]: Thank u .. u r kind ... thanx as always
Thank u guys
Alok
"I like my body craving
for the sustaining love"
excellent words... u r a specialist in handling words.... nice feel.. take care friend...
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