scalding rills blubber
soldering thoughts together
hay carts after hay carts
over a pronged night’s fissure
what oasis - what water -
caravan’s restless demeanor ….
the granger moves rather
no vengeance thunders
even if lightning gallops
faster than cover;
fate is that so -
only if death was lateral ….
12 comments:
Im not even going to try and make sense of this one...
looks like someone's having fun with words.
Mystic Rose: :)
okie let me make some sense out of this scribbling (nonsensical as usual) ...
it is about a farmer who has lost his land and all assets and is forced to move ... and this tragedy has not only befallen on him but many in his community ... their tears are are talking in anguish (so scalding rills), and they are moving to another town ..... they are talking abt wht next and trying to reassure each other (so soldering thoughts)... so the caravan's context and rest in the first para is only an endeavor to explain how tiresome and heavy the night wld have been ...
but surprisingly .. the granger has no vengeance towards life or fate ... even when hardship (lightning) has befallen and shelter frm such hardship seems distinct ... he has accepted it as part of life ... he asks is it his fate and the answer he gets is if death was the only answer that wld have remained ... then it is fate ... it is not fate it is life .... the answer is to accept life and move on ... do better and overcome any hardship that has fallen in plate ....
Now we can also read it with an individual on whom hardship has befallen and how he would approach the life ... optimism or pessimism is all a mind game ..
:)
thanks
Alok
the answer is to accept life and move on ... do better and overcome any hardship that has fallen in plate ....
like that!
'no vengeance thunders
even if lightning gallops' - I love those lines Alok - very powerful image and something to carefully ponder.
Strange parallels I draw from this one..
I think I have an pic which I clicked thinking along similar lines.. here..http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2018/1633540908_8da797cf24.jpg
What wonderful words.. you are an up and coming master of words, my dear friend.
Best wishes
Annie
Demeanor is a word that I love, for more reasons than one..
And any piece of writing that has it, manages to catch my attention, presto!!
:)
Its very painful to know abot dat farmer. Just by reading dis itself, i cant digest dis issue. Losing our property is really due to misfortune & iam sure he cant tolerate dis. but death is not the result for all this. he has to come up in life crossing all such obstacles....nice one buddy... tc..
yes, if only...
oh man...reading your explanation, this is vast. I had more of a building an imaginary world type of idea...but you have created a macro world from a single perspective. this is great.
"the answer is to accept life and move on ... do better and overcome any hardship" Message of courage.
Thanks for the detailed comment buddy.
Mystic Rose: thanx as always ... glad u like the explanation
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Janice: thank u as always my friend
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Zofo [the hermit of wondering thought]" thanx buddy ... however can u resend the link cos the link says the photo has been removed
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MM: thanx as always buddy
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Kalai: I am touched that it moved u .... thank u as always
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Andrew: Sir yes if only ... but then who knows ... thanx as always
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Siva [Ghost particle] but it was still a SF :) thanx as always
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Jeevan: thanx a ton buddy
Thank u guys
Alok
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