When pillows rumour of traitorous bed sheets
the blanket stands guard to the night,
The old blanket of yesteryears
still holds fragrance of our stride.
Almost like every other day,
the night looks upon pariah moon
and the braggart stars remembers its light,
When on an otherwise windy day
your skin for the first time smelt as mine.
The lights themselves were no more bright
and the sea rode the heavens and skies,
Conspired to coup de grace, and
through boundless surge of putsch
I was held forever in a moment’s veil.
Your touch is what I live for
it wasn’t indeed a night alone -
for I am no longer the same as before;
Like sods I wear upon your open heart
for all seasons of yesteryears to behold.
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I love these two lines the most:
Like sods I wear upon your open heart
For all seasons of yesteryears to behold.
its strong and fragile at the same time. so much like our hearts.
Beautiful Alok!
Oh Alok - this is stunning! I love the deep passion that "...wasn't indeed a night alone..." running through the whole poem.
The last verse is so beautifully written. Excellent work.
ur a very passionate man!
:)
Keshi.
"Your touch is what I live for"
wow..what a line.... i think i can feel what u r thinking... take care friend...
"Your touch is what I live for
it wasn’t indeed a night alone -
for I am no longer the same as before"
This is fantastic!
passionate indeed
a moving piece
thank you
The verse take us to express what u felt at night.
"The lights themselves were no more bright
and the sea rode the heavens and skies," Beautiful lines all, and i like this more.
///I was held forever in a moment’s veil.///
Wow... what can i say...
Loved them all
Deepa
Alok,
Now I see a dreamer coming out of his den and pours out his desires. Welcome change and lovely asusual.
i agree, this is a loving work....
Mystic Rose: thank u so much for ur kind words .. really appreciated.
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Janice: Coming from you means a lot to ... humbled .... thank u so much
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Keshi: U think so :) thanx ...
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Kalai: it is always a pleasure to read ur comments ... thank u so much
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Andrew: I am really happy now :) thank u so much
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floots: thank u so much for ur words
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Jeevan; thanx mostly buddy ...
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Deepa: welcome ... thank u so very much .....
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Priya: thanx buddy ... appreciated
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Tony [laughingwolf]: thanx so much ..
Thank u guys
Alok
How u did this? Awesome!
Venus: thanx a ton for tht lovely comment
Alok
yes, the last para, the desire, the passion... the longing, no word bhai...truly
Adi: I was hoping u wld read it someday ... I knew wht wld be ur reaction ... thnks as always
Alok
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