the wave’s lies
and shore’s cries
the eddying seas
and blank skies
thus she died with fallen desires
crouched in a squatting attire
and continued servilely
on path to uncertainty
waited for a moments thirst
to quench un-necessity
and questioned her lust
to seek eternity
the moon forms
and shore awaits
the tides gnaw
and skies adore
thus the path back to home
her realization of unsung desires
she had asked for a piece of night
when days awaited her in full sight.
10 comments:
Lovely Alok. The flow is too good..
to seek eternity the moon forms
-- how beuatiful..
what she wants, what she will get? is it her destiny or is he fate all written out?
i felt this more like a city at the side of the sea. waiting patiently for the nights when it can enjoy the elements of the world, wheres in the morning, humans travel her mazes.
Wow! I never knew u write peoms. I really envy those who can cos thats one thing I am terrible at . Keep going. You've got a lot of fans :)
dis created a nice feel... ur post r very sensitive, touchy, emotional, joy.... u increased my eager of knowing wat u have posted newly.... take care & keep going...
I read this one out loud. It flows so well!
Priya: Thank u so much ... am so glad u liked it
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Siva [Ghost Particle]: its her Karma I guess ...
beautiful interpretation ... as always ur comments sounds far more gracious than my scribbling ... Thank you as always
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Neha Nair: Though I tag them as poems .. I hardly believe they can even be classified as poems ... Its only an endeavor and I hope for the hope ... thank u mam
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Kalai: thank u my friend ... u have been more kind than I deserve
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Andrew: thank u so much ... coincidentally before posting it I recorded it on my handphone to see if it was sounding okie ... thank u as always ...
Thank you guys ... really appreciated
Alok
Beautiful Alok - the last two lines say it all for me.
'the waves's lies' and 'the tides gnaw' - some of your phrases are just so perfectly stated. I love how you write.
Janice: thank u so much for ur words ... I cant express my gratitude in words ... thanks as always
Alok
"the wave’s lies
and shore’s cries
the eddying seas
and blank skies"
The flow was rhyme.... buddy, so sweet :) i remember by beach visits.
Jeevan: thanks mate as usual
Alok
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