The two arms grab
or holds in embrace
the capacious time
awaits in earnest ….
Arms that supplied
the sutler -
loading his mule, with
provisions for future;
Or the suitor
whose roses poor, with
damsel yearning, for
ere life … wastrel dear;
Or the wren
slender, tender, rounded
whose songs so rich .. alas!
unrelated .. so many .. so poor;
12 comments:
I left a comment earlier, but I have been having some problems with such things. The poem is wonderful!
Yes, unrelated...how did the wren come in? Perhaps love is a confusing whirlwind of emotions?
Andrew: It happens ... blogger is throwing up all sorts of problem these days ...
Manimala: Well as the sutler or suitor came in .. I guess that's the poetic licence we talk of ...
love to me buddy is honestly not confusing ... love is perhaps not seen by many or perhaps only by few
Thank u guys
Alok
Happy Christmas, Alok to you and your family.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your wonderful poems in the New Year.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with us my dear online friend.
Best wishes and a gentle hug to you,
Annie
Am tired of sayin nice...tell me some other ways of praising ur writings.
Its was wonderful writing buddy, liked the last part.
nice one...
cud have titled it
the two arms grab but still
they slip,
the moments in time, the moments of truth-
unrelated left the tricks o' time
the withered rose, the fears sublime-
Annie: Happy Christmas to you and ur family too ... have a blast this Christmas and new year Annie ... thanks for dropping by
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Annie: long time ... thanks for ur kind words
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Jeevan: thank u so much my friend ... thanks again
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Saptasi [der Bergwind] that was a lovely verse ... mate I have stopped giving title ... so wouldnt try again ... but i loved ur verse .. thank u
Thank you guys for taking your time out ... Really appreciated
Alok
My comment is not here either and I have forgotten what I wrote so I'll just say : beautiful and thought-provoking as always.
I'd left a comment too :O
(Good one, as usual)
Janice: Blogger is becoming funny everyday ... as I read somewhere google will be very happy when we move to wordpress ... thanks for leaving ur footmark again to this post
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Aria: See it's not only you ... you had been facing problem with blogger and here I am ... thank again for leaving ur comment
Alok
nice post & i always had some feel with ur words & iam enjoying dat too....
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