Through chthonic realms of night
Dance ebulliently over effete dark
Hold me close as snail’s shells
My moment arrives over clapping shades.
Rise today through the strips of vim
Meander through ribbons of streams
Over the strings of anonymous rays
Let me grab a piece through gazelle’s rings.
I now see it through verdant hills
Then over the jouncing sea strips
Yes it’s here round that corner
Playing the regular hide and seek.
And I wait patiently ....
And I wait expectantly .....
Through silence of moon -
It will surely arrive soon.
9 comments:
Looks like that "she" has been found and all you need is to know yes/no huh.
Wizardly with words.. you are. :) Yes I do hope too it arrives soon and provides wings to your intensity .
Can one look too hard maybe?
I feel a torment in these last few pieces Alok. May peace be yours soon my friend. What moves in you also moves in me - let serene thoughts come your way.
yes, soon...
Pria: yes as Ghost particle had once put "uncertainty principle" ... thank u
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Aria: thank u ... when it comes to words I fail infront of u ... Hence coming from u means a lot ... as regards the dawn it has arrived and see it is another day :) but I am still waiting ... I am a bit confusing these days ... never mind :) .... tc
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Janice: thank u so much ... I am generally not tormented by anything but my ownself ... there are these phases tht forces me to seek answers tht doesnt exist ... and then when I feel i have questioned enough I just say chill. Its a rainy sunday and I am so chilled :)this piece is in that direction .. "What moves in you also moves in me" I am overwhelmed ... thank u
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Andrew: thank u for ur words
Alok
12/2/07 5:39 PM
"And I wait patiently
And I wait expectantly
Through silence of moon
It will surely arrive soon"
wat u r expecting will come soon in ur life...enjoy..b happy always friend...iam sure she wont miss u...
Hope what you look would visible soon.
hmm... i read it quite as a brook dancing gaily and skipping. a very energetic kind, high spirits of feel..
Kalai: thanks for those wishes .. appreciated
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Jeevan: thanks much .. really appreciated
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Mystic Rose: thts a nice thing to say ... thanks for ur words
Alok
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