Some days skies look green
And water prop and preen
By turns I sing
Unceremoniously -
Romancing tunes unknowingly.
Friends tease
At ever growing silence -
And smiling humming deeds;
I don’t tell them – What else can I do
When days simply remembers you.
14 comments:
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how sweet!
Romancing tunes unknowingly..
Its your day to remember with all smiles.
Very thought provoking! First timer here ... will be back! :-)
You must be in the midst of your monsoon season - love these poems about the rain and the feelings it conjures. Again I love the ending Alok. Beautiful.
"By turns I sing
Unceremoniously -
Romancing tunes unknowingly"
"I don’t tell them – What else can I do
When days' simply remembers you"
when we remember our loved ones (especially lover), we dont know where that smile comes from... friends will tease... we feel very happy not knowing the exact reason... iam sure u r enjoying dat Alok... i think i can understand u as iam also in dat same situation... enjoy well buddy...
I .can feel the warmth. rain and the remembrance. Wonderful!!
Nature has so many tunes unknowingly for us. Teasing for what is supposed to be true would bring smiles than anger or disturbance.
Nice arrangement of words to flow.
:)
shudnt it be rememmber?
oh, meri khud ki spelling galat thi!
///By turns I sing
Unceremoniously -
Romancing tunes unknowingly.
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When days simply remembers you. ///
Do i hear "experience whispering" these notes ? ?
Well written... You convey the moment aptly
love does neat things!
Mystic Rose: Thank u so much :)
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Priya: Such a sweet thing to say :) thank u much
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dave: thanks for dropping by ... and i would love to see u back ... thanks for ur words
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Janice: Oh! yes Dec is the month when it rains here in Singapore ... thank u as always for ur words ... appreciated truly.
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Kalai: I dont know abt me but ur in in love ... thts a fantastic feeling ... enjoy it to the fullest ... thank u as always
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Andrew: Ahh! thank u so much for those lovely words ...
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Jeevan; thankx a ton as always my friend
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adi: remembers was intentional ... thank u bhai
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Deepa: you know generally when I say "I", I aint necessarily talk abt myself ... and u r spot on ... this one if from experience ... u know yesterday I walked down 30 floors singing and humming ... just didnt want to take the lift too :) and then while I was walking to the MRT, there was this song "rhythm divine" playing on my IPOD and I was humming it loudly on the road with a few onlookers looking at me (uncomfortably I guess) but who cared I continued my merry walking ... thats wht is called freedom I guess ... thank u as always
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Tony [laughing wolf]: Oh!! it does ... u, I and so many of us will vouch for that hands down :)
Thank u guys
Alok
the beauty of love is that our world, as beautiful as ever, will remain ordinary in the eyes of the outsider. but when there are those who realize it, then they are in love too.
Siva {Ghost Particle]: your comment read so much better than my post ... thanx as always
Alok
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