hope -
embracing earth’s root
nurturing life that sows,
animating and living -
and growing beyond
it’s own hold,
with thrift …
hope -
wrapped under espionage,
binding and unfolding -
spreading tentacles,
growing beyond
sustaining grit …
I have seen it there
once more as always
calling my name
sans censure
intoxicating
my vision ….
found him with open arms
when I looked around
standing as always
undemanding
smiling back
awaiting …
hope that sows life ---
life that sowed hope ---
11 comments:
In search we look for hope:)
Hope is where we stand beyond! i like the way u wrote.
excellent.. dis remains me abot Priya's post...
"In ur smile & words, ther is a hope for an another person"
hope - we should not loose dis at any cost....
Sorry priya, i took dis from ur post)
Hope is such a large word when you think about it. You described it perfectly.
keeping a hold on hope
i agree
especially liked the way you ended this one
thank you
Priya: I did tag it as search and u said exactly the reason why it was tagged as such :) thanks as always
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Jeevan: Ur one line phrases are just so brilliant ... thank u as always
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Kalai: thanks so much ... and thanks for quoting the ;line from Priya's poem here
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Andrew: so truly said ... the endeavor was just to reinstate to myself that come what may ... when nothing goes ur way ... when everything is lost all that u will find is u still have hope and it doesnt ask for a penny from u ...
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Floots: so well said again .. "Keeping a hold on hope" and it again can be interpreted in so many ways ... thank u as always
Really appreciated guys
Thanks a ton
Alok
I love all the new poetry form and structuring Alok!
A wonderful description of hope with a perfect ending.
Janice: thank u so much my friend ... so appreciated
Alok
… hope that sows life ---
life that sowed hope ---
Beautiful lines.
How are you my friend?
I am back before New Year.:)
No new poems yet.:)
Venus: thanks as always my friend ... so when r u posting ur new poems :)
Alok
Ops! I have no idea fren.:)
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