A folly is someone's gain
I thought it ignored me
of reasons only better explained.
Ethnic enclave ruined under besiege
seldom an uncommon spectacle -
of all creed …. frenzied herds of sheep.
Normalcy was soon gone
envious of its zealous friend -
abnormality masters how to reign.
Only when I thought
who needed a shelter to brave -
rooted off my own feet – surrendered and dead.
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Normalcy was soon gone
envious of its zealous friend -
abnormality masters how to reign.
-How true!!!!
"Only when I thought
who needed a shelter to brave -
rooted off my own feet – surrendered and dead"
superb feel friend... something painful but really nice work...dont know why...take care Alok...
I cud identify with a few of those lines... perhaps thats where u repeatedly score with ur readers!
how d u manage to read into every emotion we feel? Fantastic!
Keshi.
Hmmm... you can read the emotions of your reader. Good one.
Priya: yes it is so universal I guess ... thanx a lot as always
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Kalai: thanx so much buddy .... sorry to have caused u pain ... wasnt the intention (and sorry for my wry humour :))
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MM: thts such a nice things to say ... u r amongst the handful of readers tht I have :) ... thnx a lot
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Keshi: Ahh! your pain ... my pain ... ur joy ... my joy ... somewhere we r all connected thru the same bond ... thanks a ton
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Venus: Nothing gives me more pleasure thn if one can identify with wht I write (though I really dont call my writings ... writings itself) ... thanx as always
Thank u guys
Alok
Truly and well said buddy. last one was thoughtful.
Jeevan: Thank u my friend ... truly appreciated
Alok
I love that last line - it says it all for me
Janice: thanx a lot for ur words :)
Alok
y sorry....no no dat feel too is good.. keep going... i really enjoyed it. its different...
of all this, the first line with stay with me, if not for ever, then for a long long time...
all my life, someone else' gain?
Kalai: I know ... thank u for reading always ... I always enjoy reading ur feedback
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Adi: u have made my day ... a line written by me will be remembered!! Aur kya chahiye ...
I know what u mean ... thank u bhai
Alok
perhaps u don't :)
Adi: If u remember u did tell me a lot though not as openely which I understood .... (And by this time u know that I am not a guy who makes or passes or judgement but can derive and deduce situations quiet well) So if not fully I perhaps do understand somewhat ... take care
Alok
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