Don’t call me by names
Or by any means
In far deserts where I live
Beyond those continents I see
The mirage of my nascent dreams.
Don’t wake me up
Let me sleep
Just for another night; where
Dreams dance unsynchronized
And winds bear joyous whims.
Yes the cembalo breathes distinct
But I still need your swing
To feel subtle resonances
And in perpetual happiness do I see
The crystal shines of icy mountains.
19 comments:
of home you desire or the magical worlds of your enigmatic dreams?
your words are your thoughts. Magical and fluent/.
U r such a prolific writer...
I am simply awed!
Title: Peace.
Siva [Ghost Particle]: Thank u for ur words :) I dont mind a magical world of enigmatic dreams :) and I dont mind the magic tht is called life as well ....
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MM: thank u ... u r more kind thn I deserve. many thanks
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Manimala: I accept the title :) thank u
Alok
Love this piece Alok.
Sleep and night lead to true reality - minus the dreams though - however wonderful they may be :)
Janice: thank u for ur words ... but then whts a life without dream ... dream dream till u succeed and somewhere within those dreams is path to reality :) every morning one has a chance to recapture those dreams and turn into reality ....(I love these discussions ... I talk a lot generally :))
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PS to everyone: I have changed the last two lines of the second para which read "Dreams that dance unsynchronized // even those winds bear joyous whims// to what they are at the moment .. somehow they seemed structurally incorrect earlier ... not sure whether they read correctly now ... anyways ...
Moreover have corrected a typographical error (I am now infamous for this ... shld start reading everything after I write them) in the first line of the last para ... breathe now reads with a s
--- had published in a rush (though no excuses)
Thanks
Alok
"Just for another night; where
Dreams dance unsynchronized.."
Wonderful. Loved those lines .. had an unrestrained feel to it and the feel of swinging in ecstasy ..
That is so wonderful so beautiful, Alok.
Your words are like a song in my mind.
Thank you for sharing them with me.
Best wishes my dear friend,
Annie
This is sweet. It makes me want past feelings but currents wants. Is that crazy?
You did a great jo here Alok. Thank you.
excellent words buddy... ur words are so powerful which makes us to go somewhere...its nice...
This is perfect! I'm soon to go to bed and I'll be thinking of this. :)
But I still need your swing
To feel subtle resonances
These can keep it running forever.
It goes beyond so many things, traveling through dreams.
nice lines...
you're getting into my fave realm now, alok! well done!
Very beautiful lines :)
Totally enjoyed!
what a lovely state to be in!!
aria: I just hope it translates into reality and doent stay in our dreams ... thanks much .. appreciated
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Annie: wonderful to see u here .. thnks for ur encouragement
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Tara [Inside our hands, outside our hearts] Ohh In understand the feeling so very well .. Its not crazy at all .. thnks for ur words
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Kalai: Oh yes, I just need a ticket .. thnks so much
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Andrew: thats such a nice thing to say .. I am honoured and humbled ... thank u
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Priya: Yes I only hope so ... thank u
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Jeevan: thanks buddy for ur thoughts
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Tony [laughing wolf]: Ah! thank u friend
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maruthan: welcome and many thank
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Mystic Rose: Thank u ... I am in awe of ur last post
Thank you all
Alok
:) Beautiful! Hope you will have another beautiful dream. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of work. Take care.
Venus: Ur comments are so soothing to soul ... thank u my friend
Alok
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