Sunday, December 23, 2007

contradictions like this passage
in black fathomable words
capers through
flanks of a mountain
on the far west side,
the Zephyr marching
with a pleasant smile;

the mighty but pleasant
oh! No not again -
with your ever penchant
puff for contradictions
look not to rein …
on this fine frosty night
lets make a toast again;

and as temporary -
and as transitive -
the snow melts;
and fluxional contradictions
that mired this passage -
have dissolved into making
deliberate summers again …

12 comments:

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

this one is really interesting - trying to figure it out.

Movie Mazaa said...

some day u ought to attempt writing a thesaurus!!
:D

really, u hv such an extensive vocabulary, pal!

Movie Mazaa said...

and ofcourse a very merry xmas and an extremely wonderful new year to u as well! do hv a blast!
:)

kalai said...

"the Zephyr marching
with a pleasant smile"

excellent lines... take care Alok...

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like the new picture. Wish I was that good looking. :)

der Bergwind said...

wow.. tatz my fav subject - contradictions n the transitions o' life.. more so becoz never got to understand the root cause behind the happenings, these shifts :)
nice verse, but again why not a title? well, tatz the personal opinion n don get me wrong... title somehow makes it complete n the mind impulses/ understandings don streamline over a name..
"...lets make a toast again; and as temporary - and as transitive -
is the reason for the toast also temp? is it that with time equations lose the molecules from either side and need to be balanced again? over things we toast today... we seem to bury deep when the days have gone by....
nice verse... xo watz santa bringing u tomorrow?? M'Christmas!!

Priya said...

Alok,

As MM said, its good you make us to go thru' to refer few words and we learn too.

Happy Holidays.

aria said...

the imagery is wonderful and totally loved the last stanza...

PS - thanks and merry christmas to you too :)

floots said...

as you said - smiles and frosts
and changing seasons
we are having similar thoughts
thank you

Manimala said...

desire! Merry Christmas and happy new year Alok!

Jeevan said...

I enjoyed esp. the beginning part and feel pleasant while reading.

Merry Christmas again buddy :)

Anonymous said...

Andrew: Did u finally manage to figure it out :) Do let me know once you do that :)

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MM: you r being too nice dude ... but then lost is the words were the essence of this piece I guess :) thanks as always ... season's greeting to u too

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Kalai: thanks as always my friend

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Andrew: Now u r being too nice u see ... if only I was good looking then ..... :) thank u :)

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Saptashi [der bergwind]: ... I liked ur interpretation and the way you think

you had raised this point about title not being there twice before as well .. I did reply to them on both the occasions ... I need to check them again for you :) ... thanks for ur words

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Priya: thanks as always for ur words

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Aria: I am so glad t see u here ... u were missed ... seasons greetings to u again

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Floots: thanks as always ...

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Manimala: I did tag it with desire :) ... season's greeting to you too

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Jeevan: Many thanks my friends ... Season's greetings to you too


Thanks guys for taking your time out


Alok