I
With impudence I lived
always like a famished man, for
lashings of liquor, were routinely
emulsified in compulsive time, but …
with a hatchet in their words succinct
they acted as my tireless prohibitionists.
II
Experience does have a pseudonym in time
it passes on in the memories enshrined,
they have been telling me
the selections needed a change,
for everything that they could pass on
had long ago, been successfully ensconced.
I now have a few selections more
for I did finally change …
I changed my bookcase old.
24 comments:
OH MY GOD LOVED IT WOW!!!!!!!!!
Alok,
Every day, we are in need of some changes. Some for us and some for our surroundings. Changes will make us to adjust with all. But.. this should be in a good way...
hahahahaha good one, and changes that come slowly are more permanent ;)
A change is always welcome isn't it. Nicely done.
I love the last verse...excellent surprise closure for this piece. You have a wonderful way with words Alok.
I agree with Janice!
read my latest post!
Kaylee, thank you so much, I did check ur post, blogging is not imp, ur getting better is, so take complete rest ... take care
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Kalai Yes u are absolutely right, i agree with you ...thank you for ur thoughts ...
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Tony [laughingwolf] lol, i knew ur reaction my frnd, the moment I wrote it ... and yes changes that come with time are more permanent, thank you
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Priya, thank you, yes u r right, for me, I somehow always welcome change ... it's a very important part of my survival strategy :)
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Janice Thank you so much ....
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Andrew Thank you so much ...
take care guys
Alok
Nice, really nice ..
The last verse brought a smile :)
It's really a wonderful write. We need some positive changes I suppose. Take care.
Aria thank you so much for ur words ...
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Venus yes truly so .... thank you so much ..
appreciated guys
alok
they have been telling me
the selections needed a change,
for everything that they could pass on
had long ago, been successfully ensconced
...I love it!!!
And btw, did you know there's ana ct of passive reading and an act of involved a give and take, almost reverential as a meeting between your self and the author, and corrections..that was wo it was done in older days..a serious contemplation.
read this, please? please?
esp the last part!
http://frothywaters.blogspot.com/2007/01/cell-phone-rings-in-folds-of-my-slumber.html
Experience does have a pseudonym in time
Loved this part very good construction must say
Sort of gels
cheers
z
Thanks. This is great stuff.
Boredom would only be left when their is no change in life. changes are the only thing that don't change. it was simple good.
sometimes change comes with a price...
Keshi.
Just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and enjoying your blog. Your poems are excellent!
Rose thank u so much, why in older days, u have live examples today as well :) btw i read tht piece :) tc
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Zofo thank u for liking the part, tht line is my fav and somehow is a summary for this piece, ty
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Mani thanks buddy
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Jeevan so true buddy, u hv hit the nail on the head, the only thing tht is constant is indeed change
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Keshi i was thinking u knw, after I read ur comment, when i look back I have realised all things comes at a price, sometimes we are able to negotiate and we get a good price, sometimes fate has a monopolistic attitude and we pay a price that is unimaginable ... it is easier said than done Keshi, but do we have any other option but to accept tht change whether forced or bought ... wld'nt life be just a tad bit easier if we accept it ... as i said it is easier said than done for on so many occassions i have just felt like a looser ... but then are we really loosers?? ( i have got into a mode where i start contradicting all i say, so i better shut up) you take care ....
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Tori thank you so much, u don't know how glad I am
take care guys
alok
Nice blog - Zafar
you really have a way with words! :)
**sometimes fate has a monopolistic attitude and we pay a price that is unimaginable
I agree...n that has happened to me. I paid the BIGGEST price. but am I loser? Nah..cos Im only human.
Keshi.
Zafar Thank your visit ... appreciated
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Gulnaz thank you so much
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Keshi true, I know exactly wht u r saying and if u rem I had said in that post of urs ... words sometimes are insufficient, I hold the same feeling today as well ... take care
appreciated guys
alok
//Experience does have a pseudonym in time
it passes on in the memories enshrined,//
superb, one of the best lines ive read in poems. it describes the melt of life and time.
Thanx Siva ...
alok
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