Ineligible but intransient ……
……… fostering reminiscence
split into thousand boxes ……
thoughts after thoughts …….
bits and pieces scattered across
………... Memories …………
…. woven in gossamer sheets
tepid in far corners of thy heart
perspicuous in scarlet ideation
reticent of saccharine spiels
with drops of honey,
splattered on floor ……..
this sunny afternoon …….
undesired unheeded feelings
………………….. house no more
do write again …………………..
I will be waiting by the door ....
22 comments:
lovely lovely words...
A very very Happy Friendship Day!
undesired Unheeded feelings..
may be I am intruding...but could u explain any such feeling...
and hapy frndship day to u tooo
Flows like music .. evocative.. and lovely as usual.
Happy Friendship Day to you too :)
(I had forgotten about it, completely)
Kalyan thanx man! happy friendship day to u too ...
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standby no not all ... u wldnt be intruding ..... i wldnt narrate frm personal exp but the feelings of broken relationship with hope for renewal are undesired and since memories have an uncanny ability to stay inhumed in our brains we try as much as possible to not pay attention to them ... but they are still there lurking somewhere .... a apart of that thought went into clubbing unheeded with undesired ...
happy frndship day to u too :)
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aria thanx so much ... happy frndship day to u too ...:)
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take care
alok
Thank you, and happy friendship day to you,
Thank you for share your life and friendship with me.
Best wishes always
Annie
thanks! :) and the profile pic is too cool... so are the words of the missive!
A very happy friendship day to you too!
Very deep and poignant Alok.
Memories do have a way of intruding and interfering in our determination to move on.
The pic and it's words enhance your poem very well. I like how it has been done.
It's a pleasure to know you Alok. May you also have a Happy Friendship Day.
happy friendship day to you, my friend :)
i miss the fun we had at spymac, but not the drama the site turned into
you continue to write very well, kudos!
-tony
I see...I see
;)
appereciate ur explanation n frankness man!
Happy Friendship Day to you too
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!how r u????????????
Happy Friendship day to u too Alok!
Nice one...
Keshi.
I like this one -- powerful random thoughts
u shudnt hav been a finance guy, lit is ur domain...
lovely
and the wait...ah! the wait
strangely, m feeling something similar, for words may be, for the correct flow maybe, but it IS there...keep writing man, do keep writing
Happy day-after-friendship-day :)
Touchy indeed..
My favo'- Memories …………
…. woven in gossamer sheets
tepid in far corners of thy heart
Belated friendhsip day to you Alok.
annie ... thanx and wish you the same ....
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neers ... thanx so much ... u made my day
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tori ... ty buddy sme to ya too
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Janice ...the pleasure has been all mine
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tony .. laughing wolf ... i m honoured
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Aman ... standby ... glad u r satisfied ...
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zofo thanx buddy
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Kaylee ... thank u so much
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Keshi ... big hugs .. ty
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Andrew sir ... ty so very much
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Adi ... thank u buddy ... it will be difficult to survive with my limited skills if i m not a finance guy ... ty so much
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Sj sme to u buddy ... if i need a smile i just visit u .. ty
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Pria ... thank you so much ... glad u liked it ....
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thank you to all of u
take care
alok
Happy belated friendship day Alok, been very busy...sorry for the late reply.
Ghosty! it fine fine buddy
alok
limited skills!!!
???
now that is modesty my dear...
thoda bohat angreji humein bhi aati to hum bhi likhte kuch aur acha, lekin apko padh k kami kyon mehsus karein hum :)
Adi, kami ... Nah! becoz I keep on telling u, I enjoy ur writings so much
u r special
alok
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