the infrequent rage of clouds
seldom bears the teeth of rain,
caricatures are often equipped with
breathing, mocking delight in all shallowness
the shoal of triviality craves un-seriousness
and cries aloud for everyone to listen ….
sometimes, beneath the foil of consequences
inconsequential too has a life, worth remembrance.
18 comments:
Wow! You really have a way with words! Very nice.
WOW I LOVE IT!
good expression !
liked it
Take Care
Vikas{V}
This is amazing, the words speak volumes.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
best wishes
Annie
Very true Alok...and it applies same with the life also. There is a saying in Bengali which in English means a bit like this- Although the clouds may thunder like anything, but the rainfall may be very little or inconsequential...
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inconsequential too has a life, worth remembrance..
wise!
small moments count as well, tremendously so sometimes, and hold the fabric of life together. and make up for big deviations sometimes.
the grand canyon was formed that way - a slow erosion by water and wind :)
Really nice, as usual, esp the last two lines.
Just beautiful Alok.
I too love the insight of your last line. Andrew is so right; you do have a way with words that are powerfully put together, making one think in ways unknown to them before.
Excellent Alok.
NICE POEM
gotta agree, powerful word use :)
that was brilliant!
its the inconsequential which gives texture to our lives i think.
thank you for leaving such a wonderful comment on my blog, i'm quite overwhelmed by your prais, thank you :)
I thought it always rained after thunder... hmmm got confused in the first 2 lines, the rest is ok.
what say you?
cheers
z
Alok once again ur poetry leaves me breathless!
Keshi.
Simply great dude
Its sooo true that inconsequential too has a life, why end up being calculative when this enjoyable.
Cheers!!
Andrew, sir thank you so much!
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Kaylee, thanx buddy, take care
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Vikas, thanx man! appreciated
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Annie, thanx so much, my pleasure!
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Kaylan, yes buddy, will visit ur new site ... thanx dude
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mystic rose, thanx, yes u r right, it those small moments that make our life wht it is besides the big bangs .... good example i must say :) thnx again
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Aria, thank u so much, am really glad ... appreciated
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Priya, just beautiful from u means a lot to me ... thnx so much
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Janice, mam thank you for such kind words ... thanx again
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Sandy, thanx man!
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Tony (laughing wolf) much appreciated ... thanx so much for that
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Gulnaz, I did go weak after reading ur piece .... thanx so much .. really glad u liked it
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Zofo, :) there is a kahawat is hindi, jo badal garajte hain woh baraste nahi :D .... that was the thought that went behind the first two lines .... thanx so much reading it mate
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Keshi, Gosh Thank you so much for liking my scribbles ... so very appreciated
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Nitin (nitwit), thanx buddy
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Guys thank you so much
Take care
Alok
It was very nice verse.
Jeevan, thanx buddy ...
take care
alok
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