In the hearth of my beliefs,
anchored …..
are chains of your thoughts,
secured …..
in zealous distraught,
is my heart
inflamed in a sconce, with
parhelic sun looking on ...
smiling ever so slyly,
partis pris of my wretched plight,
Alas! ……
visible to none, other than me.
My ignorant mind
in unborne sleep ….
and my heart wreathes
in nascent dreams ….
empyreal feelings immortalized ….
by unknown, unrealized ....
precipitated glance of thee;
walk with me for a mile ....
if not more,
and after that who cares,
your shoes will be mine and
my heart, yours decree.
20 comments:
Too good..
just bow to ur requests..
Cheers!!
Beautiful words Alok...love the last lines especially.
"and after that who cares,
your shoes will be mine and
my heart, yours decree."
Awesome! .. this is way too good.
nicely wrought, alok...
Pearls can be visible only when you feel its for you;)
A little vaccum is good coz it keeps those moments alive with true feelings.
Loce it!
1st of all sorry guys, there was some problem with the picture, so had to take it off ..
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Nitin ... thanx buddy, I just wish she bows to the requests ... wht say when i get back to mumbai, will read it to her and then check whthr that holds good :)
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Janice, thanx so much
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Aria, thank you
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Tony, thank you mate
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Priya :), pearls hmmmm, yes sometimes I wish there were no vaccum :) thank you
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tori, thank you buddy
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This week Kaylee would be recovering from her surgery, I hope she recovers fast and be back with all of us as soon as she recovers fully. Kaylee missing you here so much ... hope u recover fast
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Take care guys and enjoy the weekend and Kaylee u just take care
Alok
Like Janice, I love the last lines.
Andrew, thank you
tc
alok
lovely! Inspite of the last four lines, whihc make it more real, the whole pome has an ethereal, idealized feel to it.
Very Beautiful poem alok! last one is cool.
doing something that we dont want to or wanting to but our body wont let...the mind wants but the body doesnt.
lovely poem ;););) thanks for dropped on mine :D
I also liked very much this part" and after that who cares,
your shoes will be mine and
my heart, yours decree."
thank you!
wow...nice poem...just randomly stumbled here...
hey alok....just wanted to let you know that i am still in the hospital and will be for a couple more days but I am doing okay.Yes i naughty and brought my laptop:)
hey alok:thanks.I will be in the hospital until thursday or friday.everything went very well.the way i was expecting it to go just feeling the after pain that i expecting now:D cant wait to get home!
Mystic Rose, thanks for reading .. glad u liked it ..
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Jeevan thanx matey!
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Siva (Ghosty) first I didn't understand wht u meant and after reading it thrice realised it was profound ... thanx
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Soul and body, thank you! I am glad I stumbled upon upon ur site
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Preeth, thank you so much buddy, glad u stumbled upon. thank u for stopping by
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Kaylee, I am so glad tht everything went alright. u better rest and not stress ur self. Glod bless u girl
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Guys hope u r having a good weekend
take care
alok
I'm lost for words I hope this saids it all.
Best wishes
Annie
Very well said...you have crafted the words very beautifully. I simply loved every word in it...!
Annie, thank you so much ... yes it did say it all ... thanx again
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Kalyan thanx matey, appreciated
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Thanks Guys
Alok
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