I am the ambiguous twilight of the morning sun,
You are the personified glory of the scarlet dawn;
I am the onerous frustration of a sinned life,
You are the torch of solace, condoning my crimes;
I am the invertebrate demeanor of an inconclusive mind,
You are the cognition, evolved through the nemesis of time;
I am the reasons behind the up-roared nonsensical twaddle each time,
Your are the sense and significance behind reasons defined;
I am the recoiled torpor, amidst constant tiredness revived,
You are the blessing of concurrent inspiration to survive;
I am the uninitiated, unspoken silence of the night,
You are the grammar of my speech ever so refined;
I am the dead, buried in soil, waiting for my judgment denied,
You are the epitaph, commemorating my reasons for existence sufficed;
It hasn’t been always, that I had told you enough, but I hope you know,
You brought meaning to my life, long before it could be proclaimed sine die.
23 comments:
exquisite! the word play, the duality of emotions, and the assurance that there is someone out there who will always complete us. amazing bro.
This is absolutely outstanding Alok!
I love all the sets of verse yet am still drawn back to the first one:
'I am the ambiguous twilight of the morning sun,
You are the personified glory of the scarlet dawn;'...I love this so much - what beautiful wordplay to start a poem.
this is amazing! what an inspiring dedication.
You brought out the sun and moon exchanging the desires and recognition oneself. You tamed it so well, how one gives in complete and the other rises in full form to comeout and show the ego of self and love with pride.
I am the reasons behind the up-roared nonsensical twaddle each time,
Your are the sense and significance behind reasons defined
this is my favourite part of the poem. i like the duality of the nature of the couple.
The things you write are beautiful. The conjour up such beautiful images. Thank you for taking the time to share them with us.
great poem and hope you are well:)
u r too good with words Alok!
Keshi.
Words expressed well buddy! the day and night, both are sufficient to live.
wonderful!
very nicely written, alok... bravo
m zapped!!!!! as words fall short in even praising the way u weave words to express the feelings
Too Good... keep it up man
Lovely .. :)You find that right tone, effortlessly ..
Alok heyy HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY to ya!
ty so much for ur very heart-warming comment in my blog. After reading that, I really cant leave...not yet. :)
HUGGGGGGGGGZ!
Keshi.
what a knockout - especially that first line
it sets the whole thing up so well
thank you
Happy Independence Day Alok!
Sorry for messaging so late, I was on vacation. Happy Independence Day!
Siva (Ghosty) ... thanx buddy ... thts the assurance I am ever seeking ... am bowled over :)
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Janice, thank you so much ... am so glad u liked it
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mystic, thanx .... am really glad u liked it :)
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priya, yes when one is in love (before I move on ... I am not the character here:)) one gives himself completely ... his ego doesnt matter .... and you r so right, he loves with pride ... thank you so much
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Gulnaz, thanx so much, really appreciated
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tori, thank you buddy, my pleausre!!
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Kaylee, thanx buddy and I am fine, hope u r doing well too
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Keshi, thanx so much mate ....
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Jeevan, thanx a ton buddy
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Andrew, thank you sir
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tony (laughing wolf), thank u so very much ...
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Nitin (Nitwit) thanx mere dost ...
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Aria, thank you so much ...
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Keshi, thnk u so much buddy ..
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Floots, thanx so much ... am glad u liked it
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Kalyan, Jai Hind ty
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Manimala, Vande Matram ty
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thank you for reading guys, much appreciated
take care
alok
I am okay i guess.
you are simply superb, alok. you are beyond what I am capable of even imagining. you certainly ought to publish a book of poems. keep rocking, alok wordsworth. :)
ps: and thanks a ton for keeping in touch via my blog. your encouragement made me write another poem ;)
Kaylee, tc ...
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Nimmy, I really dont know whtr i m worth the praise .... thank u for ur kind words !!! tc
alok
perfect
very nice work
Fotoface ... thank u so much
perfect coming frm u is just out of the world
alok
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