Wednesday, August 1, 2007

Be mine .....

As I hold in my hand the specious ring,
under the impregnated clouds and the vestige of moon
I ask for a moment’s indulgence, to be on my knees
for the night can now go on, I have the stars’ decree …

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

great peice hows ya?

Keshi said...

ooh lala! And who r u asking this from? ;-)

Keshi.

laughingwolf said...

well, that's a strange thing to call a ring... but valid, just the same

was the proposal accepted?

Priya said...

:))

Alok said...

Kaylee, thanx ... I m good ... hw abt you


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Keshi, I was just practising u know .... practice makes a man perfect

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laughing wolf i m really scared now, if she doesnt like the ring, she might start reconsidering ... shld i delete the post :) thinking hard

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Priya, hi

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thanks buddies

alok

Keshi said...

hehe true..but dun practise too much cos words spoken naturally are the best ;-)

Keshi.

laughingwolf said...

i'd keep the post, even if she reads it... hopefully, she will accept

Arti Honrao said...

Awesome!
Words as well as picture :)



GBU
Arti

Unknown said...

Hmm interesting happenings :)

gP said...

superb. I cant say more...a telling of great hope and reality.

Alok said...

Keshi ..... the problem is perfection (how she likes perfection alas! she thinks everone can be like her)...... & u knw .... heeding ur advice i need to come out with some thing new otherwise i m screwed big time:) i wld like that anyways i guess ha ha! ... ty

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laughing wolf ... i sincerely hope she does ... waiting anxiously man ... very anxiously! tya

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arti ... thank you so much

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sj ... long time no see .... good to c u again ... very interesting ... keeping my fingers crossed

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ghost ... can i call u ghosty ... thanx man! appreciated

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take care guys

alok

delhidreams said...

written for me? ;)

Alok said...

adi :)