wish you a morning –
in missing courteousness,
days crowned in sparkling diadem
and arrogance in mighty powers
subverting, in its supremacy yet again;
wish you a morning –
in subdued diabolic senses,
days balancing on splinter woods
and stuttering in impaired speech
has fallen flat on its words yet again;
wish you a morning –
in incomprehensible subtleness,
days laced in velvety silky fringe
and vagabond peace in shrillness
has come home to breads yet again.
43 comments:
I just wonder who is that morning angel got your attention;)
But my morning was awful today...from some tragic news. :(
Keshi.
what a wish. great poem man
great work! again, as I've said on others of yours, I really like how you use repetition.
i agree with andrew
also - wishing someone another morning (and another etc) is the best thing we can wish
thank you
Its beautiful and powerful l morning buddy. It seems like a varies seasons there to enjoy all the days.
Alok, you sure are writing some love poems lately and I am a sucker for love poems.
"Oh capture the heart
Young seeker of love
For in the darkest of night
Like a shadow I hang on your wall"
T
wow!! a very beautiful morning wishes you have sent across.
Take care
Mona
enough to raise anyone's flagging spirits.
Wow, magical!
Best wishes
Annie
Beautiful words,
Wishing you the same,
M
btw check out my latest post Alok :):)
Keshi.
i am marvelled at ur word skills and the way u craft them so neatly to bring out a new opus everytime u write...
;)
Wish i cud write like u...
Ditto everyone else who has already commented!
My favourite lines:
"wish you a morning"
"days crowned in sparkling diadem"
"days laced in velvety silky fringe"
What a poet you are Alok! :)
lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully...we can really feel it & the emotions you have conjured in it...I am also wondering who is that fairytale princess who has made your words flow like this!
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once a-gain, wishing u mornings madly in love with love...
as we rise, the day falls, human spirit clashes with devils, the world is full of evil. We shall prevail.
You write is so well brother.
i have tagged you buddy :)
nice one... if only wishes were safe )
though if i may add... wish u a good morning - with no strings attached. (something that have always tried to feel, before saying.. to anyone)
wonderful poem.
but i liked only these two lines...
call it the feminine in me...
wish you a morning –
in incomprehensible subtleness,
days laced in velvety silky fringe
:)
Alok,
Just checking in to see if you have posted again. I hope you are well.
Soft love,
T
Hi alok, how are you? Hope you are doing just fine. Take care. God Bless.
hey waiting for the next one bud
no updates Alok? :)
Keshi.
where are you?????
Alok, is everything alright? I know I asked before, but we are all missing you.
soft love,
T
Delicious morning pictured in words..
ah can't stand it, no alok this week!?!?
Hello Alok :]
kaha ho ??????
Long time no post ???
bro...wish you have a fine time at home. come back refreshed and energized!
Hi, where are you?
Happy Valentine to you.:)
I like the mood shifts with the paragraphs (though I thought the first one could be improved upon specially the last 2 lines which are somehow off)...
but loved the last para.. I have such mornings often...
over all v. cool work alok..
cheers
in search of alok ......
How wonderful ..amazing poem ...
Nasra
Alok,
Where art thou? Are you well? We miss you!!!
soft love,
t
I hope you are keeping well, my dear friend.
Best wishes
Annie
Hi dude.. where u gone...no new blogs off late??
btw who u wishing nice morning
Missing your posts, Alok...hope you are well!
din't even update the blog
*grumble grumble*
what a great morning!!!
thank you everybody for your comments
Alok
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