Today I will walk with you to infinite
through the essence of wetland grass
whose fragrance our bare feet smell
and inveigles impassioned pleas
to consign your perdition upon me;
I will walk with you to forbidden seas
of barbarous waves ignoring heed
whose winds conceit of forever love
and beckons lost life on alien coasts
to redeem your grace on innate shores;
I will walk with you to orion’s abode
listening to dove’s testimonial soul
whose sonata sways in oriental winters
and charms your smile in small starlight
to aerial harmony in dissonance’s might;
Today I will walk with you hands in hands
all I ask for, is your walk to all those miles .
11 comments:
I can relate this poem to spring/ winter walking close to waters, and brings the romantic feeling of that season.
I'm sure the walk would be joyous, indulgent and full of many such beautiful creations..
Totally captivating Alok with the most wonderful imagery. For me this is one of your best.
Wish you a very happy new Year!
a new world a new beginning. Lets do it together, lets walk together.
//I will walk with you to orion’s abode
listening to dove’s testimonial souls//
our orion. love these lines.
Happy New Year Alok!
Great piece, yet again!
Keshi.
Wow! This is so romantic.Hmmm... are you in love? :)Just kidding.
Take care fren. God Bless.
Priya: thanks so much for ur words ...
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Aria: thank u so much .. the comment did put a sprint to the toes :)
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Janice: Ah! thank u so very much for those lovely words ...
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Jyoti: Welcome and wish u the same ... Have a gr8 year ahead
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Siva: Yes and w will make a place over there .. thanx bro
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Keshi: Hey u r back ... hope u had a gr8 time ...
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Venus: thank u so much :)
Thanks guys for dropping by
Alok
"through the essence of wetland grass
whose fragrance our bare feet smell" expensive alok. enjoyed the lines, felt happy.
"all I ask for, is your walk to all those miles"
nice one..
Jeevan: yeah I have expensive tastes :) thank u buddy
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Kalai: thank u as usual
Alok
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