tired of exhaustion
seeking divine
rest for an hour
lost in a busy year behind;
of a lighted cigar
by the green doors
a chaise rocks the cottage floor,
moves to and fro -
the painted memory
rendering the aerial shore.
his peace envies me beyond words today
where for another sky he never lived
ever so serene
ever so calm
ever the satiety
in air surround.
the sun that came this way
all of today
what day
what time
what lies
what rhymes …..
and then his victory
cheers - - -
to all his and mine.
14 comments:
Well written and much appreciated. :-)
Lovely Alok.
nice post!!!
You've painted quite a picture. My resolutions for 2008 aren't as blog-oriented, but don't worry, I'll still keep up with it.
good one...and ur looking GOOD in that pic woohoo! ;-)
Im bak now :)
Keshi.
Alok, you have been very heartfelt lately....sensitive. I wonder what you are missing. This writing offers us a glimpse of what you are holding close. I like seeing the inner you, its lovely.
T
it feels like a noir film. how life mirrors life.
I agree with Tara!
Have some peaceful times surround alok. nice lines...
Dave: thanks for ur words and ur smile :)
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Priya: my thanks
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nisha: welcome ... I wish u had left ur link back .. thanks
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Manimala: thanks mate :)
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Keshi: Sighs u saw the pic so late :) thanks mate
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Tara: I am in a soup now ... I used to take pride in the fact that no one except me knows me .. now I see something else happening .. without going into the details ... u r right in ur observation ... thanks a lot :)
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Siva [Ghost Particle]: life mirrors life .. wah! what a lovely phrase ... thanks
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Andrew: u too ... no!!! :) thanks as always
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Jeevan: thanks a ton buddy
Thanks guys for ur time ... really appreciated
Alok
I agree with Tara too. Your poetry has changed greatly since you came back - and all for the better I might add. Is it so bad my friend if people know a bit about your dreams, thoughts and hopes? When one writes from the heart it is hard not to speak what lies there in secret sometimes.
Janice: thank u for those lovely words ...
Writing on a daily basis sometimes has it effect on the words that come out I guess .. I have always tried not to make this blog my diary ... but often words become flesh and it is difficult to separate them ...
there is nothing wrong in being open .. I honestly don't hide .. anything ... infact I talk a lot but then whether that helps in opening up ... I am not sure ..
the only thing I am afraid is of expectation .. (experience is the mistakes that u have made in life ...) you know Janice I dont mind giving but I am afraid of getting (taking)
I think I am an emotional fool :)
Thanks for everything :)
Full of emotions i could feel. Hope you are doing just fine.
venus: thank u so much my friend
Alok
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