do you think on days like this
miracles will smile with exuberance;
(this bleak visage of the night
draped in black somber bonnet
looking with supplication
over the laid back winter sky)
whose wind seduces spring
melodies in lower octaves,
spasms of affliction painting
paths of miraculous effulgence;
one by one
miracles - -
one on one
miracles . . . . . .
20 comments:
We can always hope for the miracle... nice work!
I await spring and all of its miracles with great anticipation!
Wonderful Alok
time/the seasons
movement
the clues are there
if we watch them
as you say
one by one
i liked "melodies in lower octaves"
nice one
thank you
Miracle moves slow before to warm feeling for mind in the winter. Nice one alok.
That's a moving ending.
I love it ..Mircales are tiny stars the falls in my life..Thank you
Nasra
I need a miracle right now! :)
Keshi.
Miracles? Do they exist? Would love to meet one.
Miracles do happen when we least expected. Do you agree? How are you fren? Pretty busy I suppose? Take care.
nicely used words!
good work man!!
bro...been busy...very. I am here finally, and miracles is what I need. Hope u r doing fine. :)
Alok,
You have a beautiful style. I am always glad to come by here because I know I will find something wonderful.
Thank you for writing these words.
Soft love,
T
you've had enough time off... it's time for another poem!!! :)
"one by one
miracles - -
one on one
miracles . . . . . "
*sigh*
Beautiful, Alok
best wishes
Annie
lovely words...so soft & soothing....beautifully crafted!
Hey man waiting for the next one...
I believe in miracles...I so do, cos I hv seen em happening to others...
Keshi.
awesome...
I am mesmerized, that such a craftsman graced my blog....
I ama amzed seeing theintensityof ur thought expressions...
;-)
Andrew: Oh! yes hope is everything .. the day we loose hope ... we are left with nothing ... thanks for checking on me ... honestly speaking I had thought I had lost my words ... thanks again
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Janice: thanks so much ... It has been a pleasure knowing you .. It was difficult coming to terms that I will not be reading your work on blogs ... thanks for being there
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Floots: the clues are there .. it just that we are so blinded that we fail to see them when they come around .. thanks a lot for ur words
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Jeevan: so well said yet again and so true .. thanks for ur words
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Manimala: thanks buddy and thanks for checking
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Nasra: I loved the images drawn by ur comments
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Keshi: I am sure miracles are on ur way and since u believe in them .. it will surely knock on ur doors .. ty
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Middle Ditch: Welcome and thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment
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Venus: Oh! surely I believe that ... and thats the beauty of it .. it comes when least expected ... thank u
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Standby Mind: thanks for dropping by mate... appreciated
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Siva [Ghost Particle]: I am glad you are back bro ... and I am sure u will get over it too ... thanks
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Tara [Inside our hands, outside our hearts]: You are so kind ... I am elated ... thanks a ton
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Aria: Sighs! from me too :) thank u
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Annie [Annie Wicking and Loman Austen]: thanks Annie ..
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Kalyan: Thanks matey
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Indrajit: It was a pleasure bro to be on ur site ... I am humbled by your words .. thanks a lot
Thanks guys
Alok
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