Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Thus the smile that followed you
left me with no boundaries
of sky and earth and a thin line
through inconsequential time …..

The sporadic cloud -
The moments across -
Bridge abridge -
Matters cease ….

Thus the smile that followed me
through eternity ……

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Let that smile follow and shine always in your life.

Janice Thomson said...

Oh yes I love this Alok. Beautifully written.

gP said...

this is love then. Love.

Keshi said...

I cud almost feel that smile!

Keshi.

Nitwit said...

khush hai na...... good

Alok said...

Thank you Pria ... thanks a lot for that ....

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Janice: I loved the way u started the comment "oh yes" .. thank u ..

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Ghosty {Siva}: is it or is it not ???? :) thanks buddy

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Keshi: Smiles all the way to u tooooo . thank u

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Nitin: tu kahan se jag gaya ... dekh ke bahut khushi hui .. thanks for the comment

Alok

Miladysa said...

A beautiful poem.

Alok said...

Thanks Miladysa .... Much appreciated

Alok