Sustenance in vagrancy is admirable
Only if I am able to reach
The definition that I seldom seek
In contrast I indulge and not live
In the relativity of moments
The meaning of which I seldom seek
The thrust of water and the thrust of blood
Both without colour worth that soul
Lust for heaven and of love decreed
That’s the life I have stopped to seek.
10 comments:
if you have stopped seeking, you must have found it all?
Even if you stop to seek, the thirst always remains like fire inside and waits to comeout when you search.
Life and love... oh what a treasure. For if the heart was bare of love it would surely turn black and die.
Go forth with your search, find love just around the corner and those eyes that are meant to see deep inside your soul.
Perfectly worded alok.
Wish you seek a love and life that desires more not demand and order.
have nice feel buddy :)
I dun hv a lust for heaven...I just wanna be. And even that seems very diificult to achieve! :)
Keshi.
I get the feeling this is questioning your faith - something we all go through at one time or another...or am I way off base here?
Surely you'll keep looking?
Whats with Love these days Alok ??? First the longing now the questioning
Kya ho raha hai mere dost ???
Beautiful! Do not stop. Perhaps it's just right infront of you or within you.
Alok,lately your poems are very real and touchy. Hope life is treating you well. Take care. God Bless.
Tony [lauging wolf] or is it that I have become wiser ... realised the futility and decided not to seek it further :) ... thank u
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Pria: So true ... that fire might flare up any day :)
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Tara [Inside our hands, outside our hearts] So well said ..."For if the heart was bare of love it would surely turn black and die."... absolutely loved what u said.
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Jeevan: Wah "seek a love and life that desires more not demand and order" what a fantastic line ... with ur permission can I borrow that sometime ....
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Keshi: Exactly what I wanted to say ... the futility in seeking heaven and intangibles, when they definitely don't have any definitions. thank u
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Janice: Nah! u r not of the base ... I indeed was questioning the fundamentals of unachievable. thank u
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Andrew: Thank u sir ... Surely .. surely ...
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Ronak: Thank u ... No matter for concern .... Its all momentary phases in life ..
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Venus: Thank u for that lovely comment ... But though I write in the first person most of the time ... I do try to make general statements :) hoping readers will be able to identify with them :)
Thank u guys for reading
Alok
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