Tony [laughing wolf]: thank you … much appreciated
Pria: Thank for that lovely comment J
Siva [Ghost Particle]: thanks buddy …. I know where you are coming from. Agree to your view of this piece being abstract to certain extent. Sometimes you know too many words tends to direct a reader's / writer's mind to one direction and few words gives them the freedom to explore different possibilities.
There were few things that was going thru my mind when I wrote this and my attempt was to assimilate all those thoughts in a single piece and correlate them. This piece to me reads different thing at different level … I wouldn't elaborate on wht I said above but to just give a perspective … how about consider night as that last phase of night that wades into the morning …. or a man desirous of sex, …. or a man full of responsibility …… or a young man starting out in life ….. or as an undertaker …… or as death himself …. And to just add to that consider death as inevitable but so is life ….. death precedes life and not otherwise …
And as to ur point of diverging needs … not really …. It's what I was be thinking at that particular point of time ...
Janice: Thank you so much mam for ur words. Greatly appreciated.
Kaylee: Thank buddy … doing great … how abt urself
Kaylee: I hope you recover soon. Its pains me to see that even after going through such time you have not fully recovered. I pray that you return to best health soon. Take care girl. Best wishes
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very nice sentiment, buddy!
That was lovely Alok.
much abstract but with much life. I like this. Diverging needs probably.
The understated passion of this piece makes the impact even deeper.
Wonderful Alok.
YOU OKAY BUDDY?
Just beautiful!
Keshi.
Tony [laughing wolf]: thank you … much appreciated
Pria: Thank for that lovely comment J
Siva [Ghost Particle]: thanks buddy …. I know where you are coming from. Agree to your view of this piece being abstract to certain extent. Sometimes you know too many words tends to direct a reader's / writer's mind to one direction and few words gives them the freedom to explore different possibilities.
There were few things that was going thru my mind when I wrote this and my attempt was to assimilate all those thoughts in a single piece and correlate them. This piece to me reads different thing at different level … I wouldn't elaborate on wht I said above but to just give a perspective … how about consider night as that last phase of night that wades into the morning …. or a man desirous of sex, …. or a man full of responsibility …… or a young man starting out in life ….. or as an undertaker …… or as death himself …. And to just add to that consider death as inevitable but so is life ….. death precedes life and not otherwise …
And as to ur point of diverging needs … not really …. It's what I was be thinking at that particular point of time ...
Janice: Thank you so much mam for ur words. Greatly appreciated.
Kaylee: Thank buddy … doing great … how abt urself
Keshi ... thank you for ur words
Take care guys
Alok
dats brilliant Alok....
BEEN IN ER ALL WEEK HAVE A STOMACHE INFECTION A BAD ONE!
Beautiful words...
Nice blog besides.
Take care.
nice work..:)
Kalai: Thanks a lot buddy ...
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Kaylee: I hope you recover soon. Its pains me to see that even after going through such time you have not fully recovered. I pray that you return to best health soon. Take care girl. Best wishes
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Samrina: Thank you mam .. Much appreciated..
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KP: Thanks buddy. Appreciated
Take care guys
Alok
Simply beautiful alok!
Thanx Jeevan ... very kind of u
Alok
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