Thursday, November 29, 2007

If reviewed it would loose
First impression that got

Silence avers …
Silence retracts …
Silence questions
Silence answers

If reviewed it would loose
The essence that begot

Moments cease …
Moments reborn ….
Moments recede ….
Moments advance …..

If reviewed it would loose
The life that was sought

10 comments:

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

This reminds me of how when we have dreams that are so beautiful, we are afraid to let them come alive fearing the dream would somehow be tarnished.

lovely Alok. I like these writings that show real things can be.

Janice Thomson said...

'Silence avers …
Silence retracts …
Silence questions
Silence answers'
A lot of wisdom in these words Alok.
To me this speaks of meditation - the moment you try to review it is the moment you lose it.
Love this piece Alok.

aria said...

As they say, first impression is the last impression. Wonderful as usual.. :)

kalai said...

"Moments cease …
Moments reborn ….
Moments recede ….
Moments advance ….."

no one can stop the time. superb Alok. excellent words....

Keshi said...

so true!

Keshi.

Jeevan said...

There are many movements, some happen on own and some in planning. Good find here.

Priya said...

Those moments are always the best and u have to treasure it Alok.

Alok said...

Tara [Inside our hands, outside our hearts]: thank u so much ... thts all the hindrance in a beautiful dream and if only we can let go of that doubt ... of that fear ...

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Janice: "the moment you try to review it is the moment you lose it" so well said and so true .... some times I feel its the moment that I have all and if I review it or try to think too much of it ... I perhaps will not even have that moment ... change is an eternal truth but sometimes can we just wait for a few moments to enjoy the moment ... if u know wht I mean thank u

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Aria: Yes thts so true and I guess we need to change tht truth for there is so much beyond tht one moment of impression ... I know I am contradicting to wht I said to Janice ... but wht I mean is time evolves and it doesnt wait for anyone ... and it always gives us two options ... we can enjoy the time, keep it as a happy memory and move on or keep the bitterness with us for the rest of our lives ... isnt the choice our??? thank u

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Kalai so true ... one can never change the time. thank u

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Keshi: thank u :)

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Jeevan: you r so rich with perspectives. thank u

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Pria: So true ... thank u


Alok

gP said...

the uncertainty principle :)

Alok said...

Siva [Ghost Particle]: Spot on ... :)


Alok