Breathes into frugal animation
Awaken me thou wind
Blow over to the fields
Through bracing essence
Invigorate my presence.
Take me high
Over those mountains that lie
Bring me closer
To the heaven that’s out of sight
Will you last long
Oh! Thou wind stay for the song.
Breathe through me
Come let’s walk a mile
With nothing on mind
A promise I wouldn’t ask for more
I intend to smile after you go.
10 comments:
Oh, this is beautifully written Alok! I feel the same way. Many of us can relate to your passionate words - love that last line.
Breathe thru me....
Hmmmmm.....
:)
A thirst for nature isn't it..
Now check my profile and from ther u can add in GR and it works Alok atlast.
this was very soothing to the mind...
Keshi.
"Breathe through me
Come let’s walk a mile
With nothing on mind
On this day of yours and mine
A promise I wouldn’t ask for more
I intend to smile after you go"
excellent friend... nice feel of having wind as our close friend... superb..
Alok,
I love all your writings, but it is when you write something like this with simplistic words that show me your true talent. Anyone can use big words, one needs only look them up if they are unsure, but when one uses simplicity ... there is something pure about it. It is almost like you are aware of how simple life can and love can be if we would only let it.
Wonderful!
Tara
Wow! A good one.
wow... I just loved the way you have written, It just went like a song to sing.
Very nice buddy :)
Hi Alok,
Wow!!!this is great..a promise for many things and nothing more...
Take care
Mona
Janice: thank u for that wornderful comment.
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MM: hmmmm :) thank u
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Priya: yes, and a thirst for life ... the GR is working fine now
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Keshi: Atlast :) thank u for that
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Kalai: Thank u so much for those lovely words
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Tara: Thank you so much. Point taken ...
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Venus: Thank u so much
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Jeevan: Thank u my friend
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Mona: Hi, Long time no see. ... "promise for many thing and nothing more" - exactly ... thank u
Alok
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