Cold gusty winds laden with snow
white and armory with a tinkle glow
fallen leaves covered beneath
buried and rusted without a tree;
Showering sleets of cold creep
uncovered twigs falling asleep
as it touches your feet, hidden aside
unheeded it comes filled with desire;
Dark and blustery it seems outside
melting sun behind your pride
autumn is past … the winter is here
brings you closer without surmise;
Let it snow …. Let it snow …. Let it snow
breathe in the thin cold air, and sit low
warmth all around the fireplace, growing …
laced in my arms … my love … sleeping.
Thursday, July 19, 2007
Snow
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A good rhyming ther Alok and beautiful lines.
fallen leaves covered beneath
buried and rusted without a tree;
--Well said.
I am still enjoying summer and let the winter come late.
thank priya ....
I know I know .... its incredibly bad timing (he he)
tc
Beautiful!!!!!!!! i am better today but not much(see my blog)
thanx Kaylee ... u tc ... catch u in the eve
well it feels like snowing over here cos it's -2C weather all week long :(
Nice verse..
Keshi.
:)
so the time comes to welcome this 'other' alok on delhidreams...
take care brother
It's difficult write about one's feelings with poignant introspection, and simultaneously outwardly project feelings for another. I sense that this piece offers both.
The seasons are wonderful metaphors for personal growth and change, and I get that from this.
I am much better today:)
Thanks it feels good to not be in pain for a change:)
and i hope you enjoy your weekend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
going to my grandmas and to the movies do you want to talk in my c-box so we dont clog up our blogs?
okay sorry i am over there now
did you leave me?
okay i am done eating hehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice poem alok. almost reminded me of Robert Frost's Stopping by woods on a snowy evening.
I m gonna link you. Do you have a blogroll.
Regards,
Sandy.
Hey Keshi .... is it that cold back there ... u guys must be freezing .... have lot of drink (rum to be sepcific) he he
tc .. hv a nice weekend
Adi .. finally u found the right Alok ... welcome to Lapsus Calami
hv a gr8 weekend buddy
Hey Kaylee ... how can I leave u ... u r adorable ...
Have a good night sleep and enjoy ur weekend
Mermaid .... am so glad to see to here .....
u r bang on ... these verse were something me and something for all people I luv ...
thanx mermaid ...
Have a gr8 weekend and enjoy to the full
Sandy thanx ...
i have a blogroll where I have already linked u ... its just that its not there on my webpage but u r there in my thoughts and reading ..
tc buddy and enjoy ur weekend
the title attracted me,
"laced in my arms … my love … sleeping"
beautiful beautiful words
but i would also like u to visit mine, also titled 'snow'
wud wait for ur comment
tc
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