Uncharacteristic of a livid state
freakish and capricious, esoteric sometimes
inhumed in the crevices of my brain, somewhere
rested not in peace, somewhat
unfathomed and deep, ill-defined perhaps
silent like deceased ants, unclear and eccentric
are thoughts beyond comprehension.
freakish and capricious, esoteric sometimes
inhumed in the crevices of my brain, somewhere
rested not in peace, somewhat
unfathomed and deep, ill-defined perhaps
silent like deceased ants, unclear and eccentric
are thoughts beyond comprehension.
12 comments:
cool play of words
cool words beautiful
When your mind is pre-occupied, too many things pop up and things will not rest in until you find it.
good choice of words...
Im bak Alok..ty so much for being concerned! ur so sweet :)
Keshi.
A nice combination... seems like a chaotic state... I know that feeling well.
well said! wonderful collection of words to describe it. nice work. :)
Sandy, thanx buddy
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Kaylee, thanx girl ... how r u today ... did u sleep well last night
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Priya, yes it is true, i luved ur last piece. thanx
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Keshi, thanx .... btw how r u today? did u resume office
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inside our hands outside our hearts - it is indeed chaotic sometimes .... thanx
btw u write so well .... amazing
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j. andrew thanx sir. really appreciated coming from you
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tc all of u .... weekend is ahead, u guys must have strated planning for it already
alok
It's a moving poem, keep it up.
thanx mani ...
tc
alok
Hello Alok...my apologies for not getting here sooner. Enjoyed these phrases of the thoughts 'beyond comprehension'.
Janice Hi,
It's my pleasure to see you here ...
thanx for dropping by
alok
u shud read dee's blog, kindly do check my blogroll for 'love'
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