Was it hiding behind the curtains
ambushed with stain and ruptured
shuddering trees of grey wound
past three quarters a day
limbs akimbo of dead grudge
and assiduous pain, throbbing;
her blood a lesser red
diluted and suffered ...........
ambushed with stain and ruptured
shuddering trees of grey wound
past three quarters a day
limbs akimbo of dead grudge
and assiduous pain, throbbing;
her blood a lesser red
diluted and suffered ...........
8 comments:
I LOVE IT :P
the verse feels like me...
Keshi.
kaylee thanx ... am really glad that u liked it ... tc
keshi ..... i wrote it after reading ur post .... and its dedicated to u
I like the way the words flow but can't seem to truly get the meaning :)
Hey Sj .... thanx man ....
well these verses have no specific meaning .... it's wht u wld hv felt after u had read it the first time ....
When I wrote it, it was abt a pain that was old, hidden some where a little diluted but still painful ..
I also felt it personified a wound thats not fresh .... a little old but the pain has yet not healed totally ...
One of frnd T told me it represented martyrs and the lady was the country in red .....
Another frnd R said it smelt of millitants and was scared for me ...
N said it seems to be of someone tired and sick of a long day in office ....
the reason for sharing these perspectives was that it meant different things to different people ..... its how they felt abt u .....
so wht was ur feeling??
:)
it is interesting, but could u tell me how u reached delhidreams... cos seriously i thought u to be an other alok :)
m confused
and,
the verse is good
all the more cos i dont want to feel anything right now ;)
take care
Adi, ty
hope ur confusion is cleared now ..
tc
alok
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